She´s your brand new little daughter,1
so enchanted, sweet and smart.2
With a coo, she´ll have you smiling3
With a laugh, she´ll own your heart.4
It´s the time for hugs and kisses,5
Reassurance when she cries.6
It´s the time for making moments7
Full of love and Lullabies.8
For these golden days of childhood9
come and go so very fast -10
Hold her tight and love her dearly.11
Make these precious moments last.12
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Awww, you had me smiling all throught the poem.
It was sweet and well, gentle. The words flowed nicely and I loved it.
Well-written and greatly done. -
nice images, I like the buildup to the last line and then a reminder that children grow up and won't stay sweet forever. well done.
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good
thats really good and what you said is true no one can love you near as mutch as your kids i just added my daughters pis to it -
thank you alot.
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Brilliant poem, I enjoyed reading it. Thats the thing though, is this meant to be a story or a poem? A little confusing there.... I find babies so sweet and lovely, aww... it makes me put out my bottom lip just thinking about them. Therefore, I like what you have done here, wow, just that, wow...
Forever here
Laura
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