Demons

An angel is a messenger from God. They come to little children and those who still have their children eyes. They bring comfort, hope, security; it has been said many times over that there are guardian angels. 1

But just as there are angels, there are demons. They come as Satan's servants. They poke and prod to tempt us. And just as children see the angels, they see the demons as well. The children are afraid. They know where the demons hide. They are under the bed. They are in the closet. In every dark corner they lurk. 2

So let us be like children. See where the darkness hides and stay far away from it. But also rejoice in the light. See both sides of the world. The world has both darkness and light. Let us see both.3

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  • Like Simply Cameron had said, it is a good concept.

    Let us indulge in both sides of yin and yang.


  • Patchwork Comedy
    July 22, 2008

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    Very good concept... was an excellent storyor.... whatever it is it shouls be considered ... good grammar and spelling.... wish it were a bit longer though.... keep up the good work anyway


  • Embitter
    June 11, 2008

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    love angels and demons.. always a super cool concept and reminds me of how i need to workon my story.
    I personally don't go for the whole black and white ness though, because honestly.. nothing is that simple ect yadda yadaa


  • EmeraldDreams
    May 14, 2007

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    children see many things that adults are either unable or unwilling to see. you raise an interesting point in this one. adults tend to negate the meaning of too many things.


  • Spring-Sparrow
    March 24, 2006
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    I agree Elizabeth. A lot of people just smear it all together into one gray blob. We need to see the black and white. Stay away from the evil...run towards the light. Just like King's motto!!! Well, one of the old ones...great write Elizabeth!!!

    ~Kimmy~

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