Nightmare-Part One

When I fell asleep I heard these last words:1

"Your dream we be horrorous. Sweet Dreams."2

I fall into Dreamworld,a place I never go to because I don't dream.3

I wake up in a Macy's store,4

with my High school classmates following me.5

To see before my eyes,6

an adult-sized zombie,7

coming right at me.I panic and run for my life,with my friends trailing behind me.My friends and I run to the second floor,and see that my friend Erik just got caught.I scream and I run back up to the third floor,using the other escalator.I see a lady in a leather suit,coming right at me.8

Suddenly,two large plates pop up in her hands and she shrinks my size to put me in the plates.I fit snugly,and she rolls me into the jewelry case.The plates break,and then she kicks me in the stomach.Then,I find a gun in my pocket and shoot the lady in leather.She falls to the ground,screaming with no blood but she was already dead.I see my friend Noah jump over the jewelry case,and he beats up the employee.He takes the uniform,and we run all the way in the corner,where there was a door.I see Noah go inside,with the door still open.He comes back,sticking his head out the door."Check if anyone is coming!" Noah says. I turn around for a split-second,and the door slams. "Noah???" I scream out. I try to open the door,but it was locked.The got him.Now only Michael and I were still alive.I run down all the way to the first floor,and I see my godmother.9

"Wait!!!! Come back!" I say,but she ignores me.I get out my cellphone to call her,but my phone splits in half knowing this is a nightmare.Michael and I reach he parking lot,and a zombie tries to catch Mike.But Mike is fast,and he could probably outrun them.Then Mike/Michael pokes the zombie and he runs for it.Now I'm all alone.Will this Nightmare end?10

~-~Nightmare~-~Part One11

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  • MagicaI
    March 14, 2006
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    I usually go on this site everyday, at least writing 2 poems/stories/or philosphy. lol

  • MagicaI
    March 14, 2006
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    Yeah,I kinda got an imaginary-like mind.Mostly Outrageous


  • Broken Down Roses
    March 14, 2006
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    wow.....you be havin sum weird dreams dude. nice.