The Retribution

The Retribution1

It was a beautiful night in the suburbs; Sophie has been waiting hours for her Mistress Caroline to have dinner with her. She was sitting at the table, her brown hair in a pony tail and light makeup. She was wearing a tablet red and black skirt, red shirt and thigh high boots. She looked down and noticed the buttons of her shirt were open exposing her breast as her Mistress loved her to wear it. She gave the remembrance a sad smile.2

As she was getting ready to pick up the table without having a bite of what she prepared, she heard the door open. Sophie looked from the kitchen as her Caroline entered the room, a blonde, tall and beautifully elegant Lady, wearing a stylish black suit, noticing her Mistress was in a tipsy state. 3

Mistress Caroline called for her. "Sophie..." She demanded her slave's presence. "Sophie, where are you?"4

Sophie walked from the kitchen and stood in front of Caroline, looking at Her directly in the eyes. "Did you call for me... um... Mistress?" Sophie said in a defiant tone of voice.5

"Yes Sophie, I called for you..." "And since when are you using that tone with me?" Caroline said irritated yet amused at her pet's attitude. "Bring me a glass of water" Caroline demanded of Sophie.6

Sophie disappeared from her sight and into the kitchen and as she did Caroline smiled at her pet’s attitude. In her mind she decided to let Sophie play the role.7

Sophie came back with a glass of water in one hand setting it on the table in front of her Mistress Caroline. She was surprised to her slave's behavior but never said a word about it. Caroline motioned Sophie to sit on her lap as to what she refused.8

"Caroline, drink your water... I have something in mind." Sophie said very serious. Caroline obeyed Sophie and drank her water. She knew that the roles had been reversed and she ought to play along. Caroline placed the empty glass on the center piece in front of her and stared at her slave now becoming her Mistress. Sophie took her hand gently but demanding pulling her up to her, slightly brushing her lips with Caroline's, teasing her.9

Sophie walked Caroline to their alcove... She sat on the bed and motioned Caroline to take her clothes slowly, to what she obeyed. Sophie was pleased to see her Mistress in such compliant manner which was amusing to her. Sophie stood up in front of her and next she motioned her to get on the bed as to what Caroline complied without uttering a word. Caroline's naked body was now adorning their bed beautifully. Sophie took one of Caroline's left wrists and strapped it with the velvety and soft fabric of the restraints, and then she took the other, doing the same. She then spread Caroline's leg to restraint them. Eagle spread on the bed… Sophie ran a hand from Caroline's toes, up to her thighs... slightly running a finger up her slit, feeling the wetness of Caroline's pussy. She brought her finger to her mouth savoring Caroline's juices.10

Sophie left the room and seconds later came back with a blind fold, placing it over Caroline's eyes. Caroline whimpered helplessly. "Please Sophie do not blindfold me" she said to Sophie who was now in charge. "Hush now my adoring Mistress, you are now at my mercy..." Sophie laughed.11

Sophie straddled Caroline's hip and kissed her Mistress's lips softly and then hard. Her tongue dancing with Caroline’s in a passionate kiss. Sophie then kissed her jaw line, down to her beautiful neck nibbling on it. Sophie was now tracing her tongue down to her Mistress's naked breast... running her tongue over Caroline's nipple, teasing and biting. Caroline's moans were soft and music to her ears. 12

Sophie took one of Caroline's nipples in her mouth sucking gently, while massaging the other one with her fingers. Sophie pinched Caroline’s nipple hard sending a jolt of electricity which cause her pain but pleasure, all at the same time. Caroline screamed and moaned... she moved her hip and arched her back as to make Sophie take her whole breast in her mouth.13

Sophie journeyed on underneath Caroline's breast and down to her stomach. Her right hand searching for the moist parts of her Mistress... she ran a finger up her slit feeling the heat and the wetness coming from her Mistress’ pussy. Sophie smiled while kissing her as Caroline arched her back again wanting her beautiful slave to take her. 14

She was taking her time but finally her mouth and tongue were teasing Caroline. Her moans and whimpers were now so pronounced that Sophie was aroused beyond her wildest dreams. Sophie's delightful tongue was now working its way into Caroline's lovely pussy, flooding with liquids unlike she had ever seen before.15

Sophie was doing more than tasting Caroline's womanhood, she was in fact devouring on her delicate morsel... fingers in and out... of that very orifice brought to her mouth to relish, fingers extended now to Caroline to relish as well... sucking on Sophie's fingers with pleasure...16

Any moment now, any moment... and there was her Mistress's beautiful and helpless body trembling underneath hers. Caroline, such a delightful dessert positioned as she was upon a table... an absolute altar of love...17

Sophie now retreated from her place between Caroline's still twitching legs, taking the blindfold off of Caroline's face... Sophie shared a kiss with her beautiful Mistress, kissing her with such passion as to let her savor her own precious liquids on her gorgeous mouth...18

She pulled a chair sitting beside the bed in which Caroline was so laying helplessly. Sophie opened her legs and started to touch herself. At this point she had to, she wanted to tease her Mistress and punish her for coming home late not letting Caroline touch her. Caroline was whimpered... wanting to touch her... pleading in her moans. 19

Sophie was in a frenzy... cupping her breasts, massaging them... nipples being tweaked, eyes closed... She could only hear Caroline’s pleading voice "Please Sophie, let taste you... please" to what took Sophie to a new level of ecstasy. Sophie was driven by her Mistress's imploring voice. Something she had never experienced before.20

Pushing her fingers deep inside of her... coated with her juices, she brought them to her hungry mouth and sucked on them several times. She pinched her nipples with her left hand. She pinched them until they hurt, the way her Mistress Caroline loved doing it. She pinched them hard and then even harder, and with her right hand rubbing both inside and outside of her, she came to a powerful orgasms... her moans were loud and her breathing short. She came powerfully before her beloved Mistress's eyes.21

She stayed there still, unable to move... her head leaned back on the chair and her eyes closed. Caroline called for her in a soft voice almost like a whisper. Sophie opened her eyes and stared at her, smiling.22

Sophie got up from the chair, kneeled on the bed and reached for the restraints letting Caroline’s arms lose, to then hug her tenderly.23

"You've been a good girl, Caroline." Sophie expressed in a giggle, teasing her.24

"Thank you Lady Sophie" Caroline said in a sarcastic and playful tone of voice.25

Sophie smiled at her, closing her eyes and drifting away in a world of dreaming.26

"Sleep well my darling slave..." Caroline said smiling. "I hope you enjoyed the punishment you gave me. For you my dear, will be paying for this tomorrow"27

© Elba E. Cruz28

March 14th, 200629

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A Group Challenge... Role Reversal... slave/pet punishing the Mistress...

The story definitely needs to be worked on a bit more... and I will pretty soon.

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  • Swtpoetryman
    March 18, 2006
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    GOT MY ATTENTION AND STARTED A FIRE!

    YESSSS! She will paying for it tomorrow BUT had the time of her life this evening! The price she'll pay when tomorrow comes will in the end be a pleasuarable one for these slave and mistress no matter who takes the lead! Another wonderful and sensual piece - indeed - that never fail to touch my heart and soul and awaken feelings down below, too!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl


  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    March 18, 2006
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    Oh my, how sexy and hot is that!! Great write!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 17, 2006
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    this just made my whole 40 day and night vow very hard, and something else, this wa slike a very seausal and erotic story, i mean you can't help but feel it course through you, this was just very well done, keep it flowing

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe
    March 14, 2006
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    This is definately beyond expectation of the challenge...I applaud this write, you have done an exceptional job..Thank you for sharing, can't wait to see how you add to it..

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    March 14, 2006
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    Yummmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!! but you are right it does need working on hon... but damn it is so deliciously hot, that I am going to have work overtime on coming up with something before the weekend. Gotta run thought... you get your wonderful applause after I see the fixing... hehehehehehe

    Lady Sylvyr

  • Mystic Enchantress
    March 14, 2006
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    Thank you so very much dear sister Kelly for the beautiful comment. I am very happy you enjoyed the reading of this work. Blessings, Nena


  • wings of an angel
    March 14, 2006
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    WOW nena nice write, very sexy and erotic well done

  • Mystic Enchantress
    March 14, 2006
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    Thank you so very much Sister Sandy for coming by to read this work. I am very happy you enjoyed the reading although I believe it needs to be worked on a little. It was a challenge and I normally work on stories a bit longer but hey... gotta do what I got to do. Thank you for the comment dear... lots of love and blessings, Nena


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    March 14, 2006
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    Oooooh what a sexy and seductive piece..good gracious, girl! You have a natural talent for writing these type of pieces...whoooo! You go, girl!

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