The heart of muder!

I love to a the truth about the murder and you won't chat ch me!said Sam.1

I will catch you!said Sgt Evans.Nomore lies !said Kim.Wait he is lying!said Emile.Who are you?aksed Jack.I'm death!said Sam.Terrie is dead !said Wendy .How she died?asked Rj.She killed by ax!said Jack.Who ?asked 2

Dr.Miller.Sam killed her!said Dr.Hungas.If chatch the killer!said Amrola 3

Adams.Thomas E Molan was author of Dark Times a book about death!said 4

Wendy.Here read this !said Rj.A novel!said Jack.No the newspaper!said Kim.Mr.Webber's dictory !said Connor.kill her!said Sam.He escape the 5

brige!said Duncan.Michael Farr wrote poem about death also!said Tom.6

A road block,sgt this paris not new york city.said Comm.Moore.Do you 7

want to keep your job comm then fellow orders!said Sgt Evans.We five 8

foot radius around paris Tunel.said Amrola Adams.But sir the tunel that's too drangous.said Lt Nolas.Do you have problem?asked Amrola Adams.9

No!said Lt Nolas.stop it!yell Rj.Run!yell Kim .Look behind you,Rj!yell 10

Connor.Hell no!said Rj .Run!said Duncan.Evans are you in here ?asked Sam.You killed my bother !said Rj.Well,Well Do you want face your fears?11

asked Sam. Get lost.said Rj.who is talking to you?asked Jack.He was in here,Jack I saw him!said Rj.Yeppie!said Kim.You can't shoot him!said 12

Emile.You got better idea!said Comm Moore.He is immortal!said Amrola13

Adams.Sam J Walker was murder of Eric Maceolud !said Jack.Rj's bother!14

said Kim.Yes!said Connor.If I see you Evans,I can kill you!said Sam.You15

can't kill me !said Rj.You act tough and are you tring to be a hero .Evans.said Sam.No,Just tring to get justice for my bother death!16

said Rj.You use to be someone I like hanging around with!said Sam.I'm17

not a murder like you,sam!said Rj. Help me ,Evans I'm falling!said Sam.No,I can't save you again.said Rj.Good-bye sam!said Rj.He fell on my 18

sword and his head fell off!said Rj.So that's means his is dead!said Dr.Miller.Yes!said Rj.What about not using your sword for personal gain!19

said Connor.You mean revege!said Duncan.She has conscince now !said Emile.Well,He fell on your sword !said Jack.Yes,You got problem with that story!said Rj.No!said Jack.Next time pick your battles!said Amrola Adams.If there will be next time,sir!said Sgt Evans.You can't live in the past and you have got move on with life,Evans!said Jack.Are you 20

judging me !said Rj.No!said Jack.Think before acting on your motions.said Kim.Good day!said Kim.Come in!said Sgt Evans.Here some files to fill out.said Eng Foras.Common sense !said Rj.We close the case yester day!said Rj 21

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Horror :about killer whom kills for fun!

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  • The Golden Son
    June 11, 2008

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    Okay, this is really ridiculous. You obviously have no idea how to write dialogue. Take some classes or something, seriously. You gotta work on this. I can't even read it.