So Insane

I think about you 1

and I think of her2

I think of how happy you are3

and how drama would occur. 4

I try to put you out5

of this mind thats gone insane6

but then I think of how7

id be the one to blame.8

I love you so much9

wouldn't wanna let you go10

even though i never had you11

things aren't moving slow.12

The rules are gonna fuck up13

unfortunately one of us is gonna get hurt.14

I hope it's me because baby15

that couldn't happen... 16

look how much you are worth.17

Sometimes I hate the world because18

I just can't have u here with me.19

I cry like I'm a little girl20

so lost and so lonely.21

One day things will be okay22

when we can be open with the truth23

But right now I'll just keep waiting24

for the time when you'll love me too.25

I'll wait till we can be together26

just you and me27

Seems too long of a wait 28

but its okay because I've already gone crazy.29

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  • Got2BMe
    February 8, 2004
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    Another great write. I love the emotions and feelings you express in your poetry. One thing I would suggest is to try to even out some of the lines and syllables. Doing that might make what's already a REALLY great poem, a REALLY REALLY great poem! Loved this! Take care and I hope all is well!

    Laura