She was a junior in high school. Not too many friends, but enough to just get by. She had dark, straight hair, and the lowest self esteem you could ever imagine possible. She was quiet. Not anyone you would see in front of everyone in school, or part of the ‘in’ crowd. She was just a girl that got by on her on terms, and in her own way. Eva Karan. The most fascinating girl you would ever know, but never cared to actually know. 1
She dreaded high school most days. Nothing was reason enough to wake up in the morning, get dressed, walk all the way to the bus stop, and listen to little kids ramble on about how much they hate life. The drama, the hatred, and everything else that balls into a lovely little part of life called high school. May I be frank in saying she hated it, BOY did she hate high school. No one really close to her to talk to, all drama seemed to direct itself towards her, and just when she was at the end of the line and believed she could not take anymore, there was him.2
He was a dream to her. He had dark, curly hair, with the most beautiful hazel eyes, and a smile to die for. There was just something about him that she could not let go. Every time she saw him it was like her heart just stopped beating for even a split second. She would look into those eyes, and melt inside. Though she knew it was impossible for him to even speak to her, she was young, dorky, and out of his league. He was a tennis player, a basketball player, he smoked weed for fun, and she was just a theater geek. They were too opposite, not a like at all, and yet…exactly the same.3
Author notes
So those of you (which is basically ebi) that know my life know that this is actually about me...
Yeah. Names changed slightly cuz I dont want to put my entire name out there for everyone to read...<3
Hopefully heres a start to a good one...
What did you think? Please comment!
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I like it, it seems real enough and like it would be a good story if you continued with it, great job =DD
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Para 1 "her own terms" not "on".
Hm...sense a very entertaining read ahead. High school stories like this, however, are fairly common.
HT. -
Aww, this looks prtty cool. Write more!! Heh, I kinda guessed this was a bit autobiographical before I read the authors comments. Anyway, I liked the start of this and I'm eager to read more.
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well written
awww hun
this is really good. the piece is sad, but you've written of rrality of your life and thats what makes it good. I think you did really well writing this piece. Keep up the amazing writes hun 
lots of love
~~Tori~~
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wow this story is so amazing so far. I can't wait to read the rest!
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wow. i cant wait for more you stupid whre. sounds great!
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aww you're writing an autobiography type of story...
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you sound exactly like me. almost exactly. i loved this. i really really loved it. keep penning!
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Awwwwwwww that was sooo cuuute!! Apart from the finding the guy bit (which i still have to do..
) I could tottaly relate!!
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this has my attention....more..plz write more
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