She used to be happy. She used to jump around without a care in the world. Not now though, now she has to wait and that is all she can do. Nobody can help her as the darkness creeps in, not now she is surrounded. She watches as her life gets drowned away. As the illness takes control. She already feels dead to the world, but the wrapper of her soul just won't let go. Hoping. Dreaming of the chance to be revived, bought back into the life she once had. But there is nobody, she is abandoned. No-one can understand and no-one can take care of her. Why do people want to take care of her? It's what she needs though, she thought she was tough but she was weakened. Soon to let go forever. Battle after battle was fought and lost as she slipped away with eyes closed, going into deep and eternal sleep.1
The angels- they came from nowhere, held out their hands as I received. I looked back and saw my body, sat and un-moving, still and icy. But she was happy, I was happy. Thank you2
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Im not an emo lol i also wrote that when I was younger and a few things were happening in my life
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yeh i agree with ica, this is a good use of imagery to where the happy parts of us go, and if they actually are gone at all. anyway, another fab one my dear, keep writing, l8az love always sky xxx
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i think a lot of people can relate to this. I know I certanily can..and I sometimes wonder where the happy girl i once always was went?? great rite,short and to thepoint.loveyaxxxx
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thank you
im glad you could relate to it
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I really liked this! I could relate to the beginning, i dunno. i jus really liked it.
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Interesting vie in third and a twist to first at the end, nice going
xx
Rae
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