His eyes are dark brown. Never leaving my mind. He’s always there. Watching over me. His eyes always looking straight ahead. He never worried. At least about me. He always held me, never letting go. He thought if he did, he would lose me. But I was always there. I remember the first time I met you. I was at the park. You were there. Trying to fly your kite. Mad that you couldn't. I was laughing at you. Then you looked at me mad then started laughing too. I remember I was 1
8 yrs old by that time. Then time passed. I noticed. I did'nt’t see you at the park or anywhere!2
They told me you left. The neighbors. I then realized you were never coming back. You were my childhood friend by that time. So, I guess I was going to miss playing with you. 3
But then I saw you again. I was in Junior High. I was 12. I saw you and I couldn't believe it! There you were walking along the hallways. You brushed right passed me. You did'nt’t notice, but then you stopped. I was nervous. I thought you were going to turn around towards me. But you looked back. Then I turned around. You were looking for me. But I stupidly turned around! But why?! I’m so stupid! Then I started seeing you more often. In the office, the lunch room, the classrooms, and everywhere! Then as I was leaving my class room. I remember it was math. You took my hand and stopped me. My heart was racing! My hands were shaking. Then you said do I know you? I said the most stupid thing you could ever imagine! No. That one word that could determine your whole life! He looked at me confused and said “ARE YOU SURE”?4
I got scared and said I had to go. You let go and I left as fast as I could. Not even looking back. 5
Then one time you tried again. 6
I was leaving to my house. You stopped me again. You said “look I know you” “Don’t you remember me”? I said no again. He said “we used to play together when we were little”. I said no once again! “Come’ on!” he said. I know you do! Then I said “oh, I remember now!” Jesus right? You smiled. Then I smiled. We both smiled. Smiled for like 10 minutes. So, I said. So many years he said. His hands now in his pocket. Yup I said. We said “cool” at the same time and started to laugh.7
Time passed and we were boyfriend and girlfriend. I was so happy. I remember we used to send little notes to each other. I would give theme to your little brother and he would give it to you. Then you would write back to me saying how much you loved me and cared about me. I would always sigh happily.8
One day I was mad. I had detention. The teacher told me I was not paying attention to class. So she told to come to detention right after school. As I was walking to the teachers class room. Jesus stopped me. “Are you OK” he said. No I said mad. He told me “come over here”. I screamed and said no! From then on I never saw you again.9
You were'nt’t at school. I asked your brother where you were. But he would’nt talk to me. Then one day I did'nt’t see your brother either. I looked and looked. But neither of you were there. Everyday I looked, but nothing. Then I realized you were never coming back. Oh, how hard it was to forget you. I loved you so much!10
But somehow I got over it. I eventually forgot about you. But the thing I will always remember about you, are those dark brown eyes that I fell in love with.11
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OMG!!!! THis is soooooooooooooo old!
We werent even bf and gf.It was just a stupid crush!
I cant believe its been that long! It was funny to read again though! -
oh! this is so sad
did it really happen? if so, i am so sorry. this is a heart wrenchingly sad story, it must be one of the most terrible things to happen, to lose a love. i am so pleased that you have got over it, and this is a good reccount.
if, however, you did not have this happen to you then i also marvel at your skills to make a story seem so real!
thank you for entering and good luck
polly -
uummm choppy? well thankx for reading anyways!bye!
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Hey,
Great write.. it tells a very unique story with great description that draws the reader into the story. Sometimes I feel it's a little choppy, but not too bad. Great work and thanks for entering the contest =)
Becca -
yeah well thatnkkx for reading! He will always be in my heart though.thankyou for reading!take care bye!
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Such stupid things ruin such important relationships in life. I have a friend named Ian, he and I experiencing something similar. We'd never dated, and even knowing he was in love with me in eighth grade I attempted to be matchmaker between him and a friend of mine and it worked. The only problem was she knew he was in love me with me too and forbid him from speaking with me as a requirement for being in a relationship with her. We didn't speak for four years and I was the one who finally came up to him asking if he was o.k. I'm glad he said yes. I lost him again when I moved from New York to Arizona to start a new life. I found him when I somehow managed to finally harass him into visiting me for a month. I wish he was still here but I know that I will always have his love and I have no doubt that your brown eyed man thinks of you just as often as you do of him and kicks himself in the ass equally for the past.
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Good Story
hey this was sad but you had my full attention it was really catchy and i like it alot i hope you find your love soon and dont let love stop ya either DieAngel -
Great Story!
AAAaaawwweee, this was so sweet, you really can tell a story, you kept my attention the whole way through it!
Thanks for sharing you, and a part of your past with us all, I look forward in reading you more! Keep up the great works, and please pen on!
Much love always!
-Timothy
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Sad sad story. I hope it all works out for the best.
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aw thats really sad and emotional. i hope you find him again some day
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MaybeYou'llSeeHimAgainSomeDay?!!!
Very touching story....if you don't read "Life Song"...then read "Fallen"....either way...this was great...sorry you lost your Love...the edges of the write are cut off...and I can't read all of it....but I still got the main picture...ah....to have to let go...of some one we Love so much....I was almost wondering if it was metaphoric...because his name was Jesus...but the story describes an Earthly relationship....good detail..with awesome description....I'm able to put myself in your shoes say to speak...I enjoy your writing style.. God Bless..
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