CUT TO:1
INT. EMMETT'S HOUSE, DINING ROOM - NIGHT2
EMMETT, CASSANDRA and TIM are sat around a smallish table,3
eating a meal.4
CASSANDRA5
How was everyones day today?6
TIM7
I made a story today! It was8
about a camel. A camel that can9
fly and goes WHOOSH!!! Yeah!10
TIM acts this out with his food11
EMMETT12
Stop playing with your food. It's13
annoying me. You shouldn't play14
with your food.15
CASSANDRA16
Shh... Emmett. You've had a hard17
day. I hate interviews too. No18
need to take it out on him.19
EMMETT sighs, puts down his knife and fork, finishes his20
current mouthful of food.21
EMMETT22
I'm going out. I'll be back23
later. Maybe. 24
EMMETT stands up, jerking the table backwards, as TIM and25
CASSANDRA stare at him.26
CASSANDRA27
You, are going nowhere. You just28
need to calm down. Here (she29
reaches out for EMMETT's arm and30
he pulls back) oh. I'll put some31
music on then. Everything will32
look better in the morning.33
You'll see. 34
CASSANDRA retrieves her arm and walks over to the music35
system. EMMETT leaves the room.36
EMMETT37
I'm going to bed. As you said,38
it'll look better in the morning.39
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INT. INSIDE EMMETT'S HOUSE, BEDROOM - NIGHT41
FROM ABOVE42
EMMETT is lying in bed, CASSANDRA draped over him limply.43
She is asleep, EMMETT facing away from her. We cannot yet44
tell whether or not EMMETT is asleep, however his eyes are45
closed. EMMETT blinks his eyes open, and the camera46
corkscrews down, ending beside EMMETT. He closes his eyes47
again. We can now see that he is mumbling. We zoom in on48
his face, and the mumbling becomes coherent.49
EMMETT50
...nger hair. I sat myself upon a51
spike, tall and thin a pillar it52
was. Fortune...53
EMMETT gasps and he realises he has been talking to54
himself. 55
EMMETT56
(Whispering)57
What made him?... Why do I58
care?... I want to know.59
EMMETT blinks again.60
CUT TO:61
INT. CHURCH HALL62
EMMETT and CASSANDRA are talking to various other63
parishioners. EMMETT is walking from person to person with64
an obvious fervor. Everyone is wearing shades of grey and65
pale browns, including CASSANDRA. EMMETT stands out,66
dressed in black. His hair slicked down.67
EMMETT68
You've never wondered? 69
TOMMY70
Look, Emmett, I see you want to71
know. But I have all my trust up72
there. And in here (he gestures73
to his heart). With this, I don't74
need to know any more.75
EMMETT76
Yeah. Right. Great help. Who do77
you think might know about him?78
TOMMY79
Sure, you could try asking Old80
Cammerie. She's always been good81
at knowing people.82
EMMETT83
Hey, thanks. Cammerie! I need to84
ask you something!85
EMMETT approaches a woman of sixty. She smiles warmly at86
EMMETT.87
CAMMERIE88
Well, if it isn't, let's see.89
Yes! Young Emmett right? 90
EMMETT91
Right! I haven't spoken to you in92
years. How are you?93
CAMMERIE94
I'm fine, thank you. Life95
treating you well?96
EMMETT97
It's dealt me a mystery Cammerie.98
CAMMERIE99
Ooh, I love a good mystery. Makes100
things more exciting. I guess101
you've come to ask me then? I'm102
your last resort? (She chuckles103
to herself)104
EMMETT105
Yes, you overheard me earlier106
then?107
CAMMERIE108
That's about right. No answers109
yet?110
EMMETT111
No. No-one seems to care much112
about him. He's just another old113
fool who's wasted his life to114
them.115
CAMMERIE116
So, what do you know about him? 117
EMMETT118
Well, who is he? What's he doing119
there? 120
CAMMERIE121
I don't really know much. He just122
sits there. Never known him not123
to be there. At least, I can't124
remember a time when he wasn't.125
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Comments
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*groans* Chrissy!!! I wanna read mooooore!!!
Cass -
yup. You have to read part one lol
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nice screenplay. this is creatively named "fool on the hill" maybe i have to see part one first. :-)
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Really nice work.
I loved all of it, muchly :3
I like how you nammed it Fool on the hill! n__n It reminded me of it so much!
Great write, as always n_n
~Pancake -
I wuv it Chrissy!
Cass
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