Every day it's the same thing1
You flirt2
I flirt3
Everyday you tease4
Everyday you get to me5
My body can't take it anymore6
Are too much to handle7
Yet I can't help it8
You work me really well9
I can't stop you10
I can't help it11
You are really good12
And I do enjoy our talks13
Though I can't help but wonder14
How it would be15
You know16
You and me17
Though I'm sure I'd miss our daily talks18
I'd like to do more19
Though I guess I'd miss it too much20
You know21
Our talks22
Author notes
....I'm not sure how I came up with this
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Comments
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Sweet and soo relatable.
I get this and well, good luck with the guy, girl....Great, am I talking to a character now?!
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this is good. i can relate in a way. sort of, i am only 16! but still, i like a friend of mine, but iv done nothing about it cos i like talking with him! i like this, it flows really well and its easy to understand, no 'read between the lines' stuff. thanks for commenting on my poem.
Kasey -
Isn't this a poem?
I would have though so. Maybe I am wrong. I dont know, Good anyway. Your hesistating a bit. Good. Theres not much more to say really.
Good
Laura -
Are you hesitating, too scared to get your point across that you try to provide a clue?
nice and sweet.
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