Moods

Moods1

Moods can change,2

Moods can come and go,3

Happy, sad, angry, glad.4

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Will I feel happy tomorrow,6

or will I feel sad,7

Will I feel glad tomorrow,8

or will I feel bad.9

*10

Will the sun shine,11

or will it rain,12

Will the day be mine,13

or will I take the strain.14

*15

Moods change,16

So do I.17

So do you.18

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  • CallMeWhenUrRich
    August 1

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    As far as I go, this is a pretty good poem on moods. i LOVED the third verse. Especially the part of the rain and the sun. Woderful job.

    Keep writing!!!

  • starwing
    March 18, 2006
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    the struggles with depression suck..but they derive from anger turned inward..use your writings to get it out...I speak from experience..and remember the only thing you can change is you..keep writing sister..peace will come..shzoosy... I also write out my depressive thoughts>


  • ralph zimmer
    March 9, 2006
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    Good poem.

    This is a good poem and the author has made an effort to write. But it could use some work to make it better.