Vampires (with SorrowfullSong}

I am just a guy named Gary Franklin, of the Franklin Museum. Was it just the other day? A turned vampire, who I once loved, finds me, and has orders to kill me. But for some reason instead turns me into a Vampire. Now having betrayed her clan, she is being hunted.1

There tongues burning with passions fire, until suddenly... she bites. She holds him to her, standing now. She doesn't stop; he moans aloud, such feelings he has never felt.2

He collapses to his knees in pleasure; she goes down with him, drinking slowly.3

He feels a fire begin to burn through his veins She stops and pulls back. 4

"Damn it! What have I done?" She dresses quickly knowing he is going to die if she doesn't... 5

make him like her.6

She slashes her own throat a bit, holding him to it, almost lovingly. “Drink Gary.”7

Gary sucks greedily after only a moment’s hesitation, not understanding his thirst, he closes his eyes, never having done this before.8

She leans back, his strong hands holding her roughly, unaware of what he's doing.9

His hands hold her arms; his eyes closed, only the need is known... the need for blood.10

Visions pass quickly through his mind; she winces a bit, “S-Stop” she cries. He doesn't hear her11

Thoughts and feelings he has never felt or seen pass through his mind. He can't stop, he doesn't want to, he wants it all. 12

Her eyes close weakly, “G-Gary....s-stop” He still hears nothing, but the beating of her heart, growing softer. She hits him hard; she tries to stand stumbling away, blood rolling down her neck.13

Knocking him across the room, where he lies stunned as she falls to her knees. She falls hard, on her side, starting to lose consciousness. He crawls to her, understanding what he has done by not hearing or listening to her pleas; she raises a hand, “N-No...14

go...away....” 15

He kisses her after biting his tongue their blood now as one, drinks it slowly, needing it, as suddenly his body changes into it's vampyric form. His innards dying...she pushes him away, knowing he cannot offer her his blood now he needs it. Till she pushes him away and cramps running through his body have begun  or are begun growing stronger.  He lies writhing on the floor in agony, “Y-Your body is dying...do not fear....it happens to us all,” she struggles to stand, falling, falling again, her vision blurred....16

He losses consciousness, the room turning black, all senses fading away17

He knows he is dying - she tries to get to the bed, but falls unconscious on the floor.18

He lies on the floor, his body changing, fangs growing past his blood-smeared lips,19

her body heals her, she awakes at an hour before dawn, still weak*20

His hair once short now lengthens, turning a dark brown. Falling across his shoulders his features, once handsome, now harden into something beyond handsome ethereal almost like that of an angel. She looks to him, forcing a smile weakly.21

None, of this is he aware of, as he lies upon the floor.  She22

moves to him weakly looking down at him, “Are you alright?”23

Slowly his eyes begin to open and blink; colours he has never seen behold his sight; a shimmer around this girl that looks at him but still he feels weak. “G-Gary...are you alright? Gary..??”  His mind knows the name but can't associate it with anything24

P-Please answer me...I-I need to sleep, dawn approaches...I need to know you are alright25

He tries to think but visions of night, light, and shadows invade each thought.. his hearing pounding with noises from all around. She falls forward right next to him, her cheek hitting the hard floor, falling unconscious...morning arriving.26

He closes his eyes; puts hands over ears; his heart now pounding, loudly; she breathes weakly, lying next to him.  Slowly he curls up beside her spooning with her 27

The day passes quickly, as night now approaches. Awakes suddenly, standing quickly.  The events of the previous night haunt her mind; she quickly stands, he still asleep...she rushes to the bathroom showering quickly, dressing in her same black pants and shirt she had on before.28

He smiles as he awakes in her arms not understanding yet .. But knowing this is with whom he belongs looks to him, a bit - a bit afraid,  G-Gary...Ummm .. he says 29

then asks ... “What’s your name again? Drea.. ?  What happened?”  “D-Don't ask....30

I'm going to be in so much trouble...”31

I rise, slowly feeling a strength like none other before. he feels so light as well.. he smiles at her, “What ever it was ..WOW do I feel good!!!”32

Looks away quickly.  “Stay here...I have to go” Stands, sheathing her knife at her belt. 33

“But ...But” he stutters out, as she quickly goes outside, she looks back, knowing she loves him, but putting love aside. It can never be...I-I can't love you.34

He stares at the furniture and walls, each threads, each minuscule, he can discern.35

Rushes back to her mansion, her leader, Kraven, there. “Where is the human...” she shivers, knowing he is no longer a human.36

“In a motel...safe.” What do you mean? I can feel your heart beat, beating inside my veins.  “What is he needed for?” Kraven smiles. “ The Lycans (werewolves) mean to turn him into one of them, and then have a vampire bite him...makes a lethal killer, no?  Have to have a specific blood type for it though, Kill him, Drea, quickly.”37

Drea nods weakly, knowing she could never.38

She races back to the hotel, opening the door, entering, freshened up a bit.39

He smiles brightly seeing her again is like a moonbeam flowing through the trees. 40

Looks to him sadness and fear in her eyes. As she stands there now before him lowers She races back to the hotel, opening the door, entering, freshened up a bit.41

He smiles brightly seeing her again is like a moonbeam flowing through the trees. 42

Looks to him sadness and fear in her eyes. As she stands there now before him lowering her eyes.43

He tips his head reading her expression, but not knowing why it is there. He steps to her touching her face, turns into his touch...” Tell me Drea .. What is the matter?”44

“-I am to kill you”.. he pulls his hand away.. “but Drea ..that’s impossible we are as one?45

Tell me .. What must we do?” “What must we do?” “ I don't know...they'll be here within an hour to see your body, they think you human.”46

“Then we must flee you and me.. Until we can think of something.”47

grabs his hand, “ T-They are my family, Gary...Can we count on some of them to help us?” he asks.48

“N-No” ...lowers her head. “The reason the werewolves were after you, was to make you a vampyric Lycan...very deadly foe...my entire family despises lycans...they'd kill you on sight.”49

“Well I am one of you now I think?” “Will the vampires accept me?” “No...Not with the lycans after you” We can team up and go after the leader of the werewolves’ sinks to her knees* they'd rather kill you...easier...simpler...50

He pleads .. but she knows the family would never accept what she has - DONE51

FORE NOW SHE IS AN OUTCAST TOO, sighs softly.52

Realization enters his mind as he becomes aware of her danger.  Closes her eyes. “53

I must go alone .. tell them I was gone when you returned, Find me in the forest.”54

“no!” grabs his hand.55

Her tender flesh against his, “ I-I...I lied...56

I love you.... I cannot play this game.... we should just run57

You must!”  He pushes her and starts heading toward a window, grabs his suddenly, her strength more than his. “NO”58

Tears form in his eyes as he looks at her. “Lets just...run.” The danger,  now becoming very real. 59

Suddenly the door flies open; Kraven stands there; “You aren't running anywhere!”60

He looks and sees a tall older man.. his robes touching the floor, sighs softly as she goes down on her knees. “ Victor...” He kicks her hard in the cheek, sending her sprawling on her back, “I raised you to do...this?”61

He runs to protect her, but the Vampire slaps him, knocking him clear across the room.62

The man smiles, kneeling down beside Drea, grabbing her by her hair; “Get him...back to the mansion.”63

His teeth rise out his features hardening64

But he cannot stand against this man he knows, the man smiles. Nearly 7 men grab him as he grabs Drea taking them outside to a truck.65

He opens the door, throwing them in...Drea screams suddenly in pain. He struggles, but fruitlessly. She crawls to him, whimpering, revealing a large basketball size piece of glass stuck in her shoulder, “T-The floor...littered in glass.”66

His power strong but new.. he pulls the glass from her kissing the wound ... tasting the blood and watches as it quickly begins to close, winces softly as it does.67

“What happens now?”  he asks.  “I die...you watch...then you die...or worse...live forever in a coffin....I-I'm so sorry...”68

“My God we can not let this happen.”  He looks around for away to escape. It's useless...he has this rigged...there's no way out...it is as it was in the old world...you will watch me burn alive on a stake.69

“...And then they will lock you in a silver coffin for eternity.... the punishment for making a vampire without questioning the Lord or Lourdes’s of the house...”lowers her eyes.70

Well I take this memory of you with me for I'll love you till I die. We will never die so someday... he feels the moment is hopeless and accepts now his fate. But will not deny his love of Drea 71

Sits weakly in the van, her shoulder bleeding profusely, her body bruised from the vampire's cruel hands. Gary looks out window; his life out of his control. Fates hand has turned his life upside down in a single day.72

He awaits his fate, reaches for Drea's hand; she sits to the corner, blood rolling off her lips;73

Grips it weakly, her hands covered in her own blood. They look at each other with loves longing. 74

He raises her hand to his lips, kissing and licking her blood.  Weakly leans in kissing him, sighs softly, moving closer to him*75

He whispers to her. “My love no matter what happens. Know I love you76

Know I love you...and know that you will have to live with my absence” Her words confuse him.77

“A coffin awaits us both does it not?”  He asks, “nay...only one, mine...you...you shall be kept alive...in a cage.... in a prison.... they wager the show you will receive when they kill me will be enough torture...eating at you for eternity...” Her eyes cloud in bloody tears*78

I cannot live with out you...We must find hope somewhere hope is gone!79

His teeth grow and retract spasmodically.80

“I'm sorry...forget about me,”81

“Can we force them to kill us both by trying to fight?”  He asks whispering, chuckles. “They'd expect that, m'love...”82

The van stops, the doors open, and rough hands pull her out first, dropping her hard on the ground. He jumps out sailing far pass them trying to escape and find help a vampire grabs him easily.  “LET HIM GO!”  She cries. “He has done nothing wrong.”83

WAM* a vampire kicks her hard in the cheek; she falls hard, not getting up right away.84

He struggles furiously screaming, the vampire kicks her repeatedly.85

He pulls the vampires with him as he struggles to reach her side, she winces coughing blood,86

forcing himself to cover her and protect her from the beating.87

His hands held fast behind him, he still is able to touch his lips to her, they pull him away, making her stand, her cheeks gashed, her lips bleeding, she looks away from him.88

The vampire laughs: “ Take them away...”89

He stares at her...still struggling, tears running down his face90

As he is forced away91

She is knocked out, awaking in a chamber, tied cruelly to a cross. She opens her eyes, seeing him chained on the floor. Looks down to him weakly.92

He looks up at her; Have faith my love .may the end of your torment come soon, as mine just begins. I'll come to you on the other side.93

Her down, putting her on her knees, as they raise the whips,94

As soon as I can,95

He closes his eyes to her torture, not wanting to see her pain.96

But hears her trying not to cry out; and opens them in defiance to watch grimly .. Hoping to let her know he will never forget her or these moments.. 97

They will burn forever in his soul... till he can avenge her,98

she winces in pain, as each lashing makes a mark on her back99

His tears run freely, but he does not look away100

They see his defiant stature and kick him ... he glares back in anger,101

she tries to stand weakly,102

they kick her down hard,103

he can hear her ribs break.104

He yells out ..”Go ahead Kill her .. But so help me God you better kill me!  For someday I will certainly kill you!”105

Suddenly the door blows open, a tall woman with long black hair and a man with equally long black hair enter.     She looks up weakly, barely able to stay conscious.106

The woman frowns ‘STOP THIS!’107

He stares, at the door, as a woman of radiant beauty and stature enters with a commanding voice.108

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  • Shahoodeh
    February 10, 2004
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    This is based on Underworld isnt it?? U used the same names even..!!

  • interested pyro
    February 3, 2004
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    whoa whoa whoa....i really hope there is more of thi...i really do man...