If I Was Teaching Elementary School

If I was

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i was bored and i know it's not good, but hey!

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  • SageSyren Greeters member
    March 10, 2006
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    I also liked the beginning and then it seemed you got bored with the story and tried to end it quickly. I would have liked to hear more about their relationship. I did like the way you interjected bits about the classroom and the kids.

  • brokenpoet
    March 5, 2006
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    Thank you for reading. This was actually just a stupid email I sent to someone and saved it lol. It's def. nothing compared to anything I've ever written, I'd hate for you to judge my writing by this lol.
    I know I'm not that good of a writer, but honestly this is one of the worst thing's I've written.

    Thank you for reading though.


    Sincerely,


    Melissa


  • golden-angel13
    March 5, 2006
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    Its a good try, I liked the begging, but you went a bit pear-shaped at the end. I think it would have been cool if you had told us more funny things about your class.
    Laura