Back and forth she roams. Trapped in this dark, damp, and lonely1
room. She can't find her way out. She's searching forever in vain.2
Desperate cries for help engraved into the walls of her jail cell.3
Eyes cast upon them but no one says a word. No one can comprehend4
them. She doubts they even try. And again they fade away.5
Guards pass by ever so distrustfully but she won't let them see6
anything. Her reins are tight enough as it is. They don't give a7
care about her. She's just another prisoner. Holding her there is8
only their job. Who cares how she suffers as long as they don't get9
blamed.10
She pleads for her freedom. But yet they ignore. "Did you hear11
something?" "Ignore it, it's nothing." They walk away again as they12
always do. And yet again she's left alone in her bitter tears.13
How long has it been since she's seen the sun? How long since she14
felt warm rays against her skin? No sun shines through the window.15
For they locked the window and hid the key. They will not let her see16
what freedom looks like, hoping she'll forget and conform. What they17
don't realize is just because you can't see something doesn't mean it18
isn't there.19
They cut her off from the other prisoners. She is poison to their20
minds. They're becoming hopeless drones. With them falling away she21
is left utterly alone. But yet she disregards their attempts to bring22
her down. She finds herself a new friend, with the lovely name23
Solitude.24
They become frustrated with her. She defies all of their rules.25
They can't break her down. They can't mold her into their perfection.26
She knows her own perfection. They lock her away deeper. With27
chains they believed she could never pass through. They treated her28
like a disease and kept her locked alone.29
For the first time in forever she found out what true hope was. She was now alone and unwatched. She looked around at where she lay. The room was empty and desolate. Not a camera in sight. No guard to be30
found.31
Now was the time. She took out the knife that was stuck in her back. Staring longingly at the blade. The shimmer so close to the sun she left behind. This blade was her sun. It was her warmth. It was her32
happiness. The bringer of her soul's desire. They pushed her too far33
and she was finally ready. At last cut her way through the crimson34
bars to freedom. Speaking the words "I found the key. I opened my35
window. I told you freedom was there."36
Author notes
Mostly symbolic.
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Comments
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Great
Curiously intriguing, draws the reader in deeper with each sentance. The form is admirable and even inticing; a great blend of symbolic poetry and narrative storytelling. I'd give a 9 out of 10. A few structural errors.

