The Gates of Nowhere

Nowhere is a place. It's not a very friendly place. Nowhere is where the darkness overrules light. The sun has been shunned. The moon and stars fear to shine. And shadows rule. All the creepy-crawlies of our nightmares come out and haunt us. They are angry for letting our imaginations think of anything like light. Nowhere shall never see light. We are able to escape though. If we boldly face it, if we say we are leaving to never come back we shall go. The journey will be hard though. Nowhere wants to keep us. It will fight, urging us to stay, stay with me, stay, stay, stay. Only the strong will make it out. There is a gate that leads out of Nowhere . The gate only opens if it knows we want to leave. It only opens if we want to be saved. The gate only opens when we want it to.1

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  • Cloudreamer
    March 1, 2006
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    Spongebob huh? *giggles* mK. I'll go with it. I'm glad you liked it.*blushes*


  • Spring-Sparrow
    March 1, 2006
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    A++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

    ...................................
    Dude.
    That was like...
    "Cool-"
    "-but weird."
    (Not coolwhip though.. )
    But MAN that was powerful...that really says...something. Gosh I can't even explain what it says. Not in words.
    But seriously GREAT JOB that was totally, as the fish in Spongebob says, "aaaaaaaaaaaawesome!"


    ~Kimberly