I knew your momma when,1
she was punk-rock and it wasn't cool,2
showing up at the boss' bar-b-que in3
tighty-whiteys, wife-beater, and ever-present combat boots4
laughing her maniacal laugh -5
snorts for staccatoed punctuation6
when she said her name was Jane7
and karaokes to Sinatra8
when she'd had too much acid,9
and not enough sleep10
when she was drunk and I punched11
her down the stairs because I12
was too drunk to care13
I knew your momma when she was fragile,14
eyes strained from too much mascara15
and too much life.16
Author notes
Unfinished... had to get it down before I forgot parts
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Although this is unfinished,
I enjoyed reading what you had already typed.
I like it, you did such a good, to the point,
description of this person.
Amazingly done once more.
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