school sucks1
teachers are boring2
some student are dumb asses3
cheerleaders are b-tches4
geeks are just geeks5
janitors are usually creepy6
the principal is gay (no, not happy)7
homework is stupid8
too many cliques9
stereotypes10
nothing on the blackboard11
ever makes sense.12
***13
detention 14
is cool.15
because we have the same16
teacher on duty17
Ms.Harris.18
she let's us listen19
to our iPods,MP3s20
as long as we keep21
the decibel level low.22
food is allowed but only23
small items24
like snack cakes25
candy26
or bags of chips.27
we can do whatever 28
we want as long29
as we're quiet.30
Ms.Harris is anti-boredom.31
thank god.32
some days I get in33
trouble just to34
earn my spot in detention.35
like today.36
I skipped class.37
got caught.38
Ms.Harris smiles39
at me as I enter40
'Afternoon Coaches.'41
'Afternoon Ms.Harris. How are you?'42
'I am well, thank you. And yourself?'43
'Good. Glad to be here.' 44
she smiles again45
and offers me a cookie46
from the tin on her desk. 47
I take two48
and sit in the back row.49
***50
Tattle-tells51
mom calls me into52
the kitchen53
on my way upstairs.54
I swear55
drop my bags56
and park myself57
across from her at58
the table.59
Jame stands at the stove60
her grey hair twirled61
in a tight bun.62
she sips her tea63
and smiles.64
'Hello West.'65
three smiles today.66
and she didn't use my whole name.67
she must not be mad.68
'Hey grandma,' I say smiling back.69
mom turns my 70
attention to her.71
'The school called today west-' typical72
'They said your cutting classes again.'73
shrugging 'Okay?'74
mom sighs.75
'West, I am really tired of the school76
calling constantly about you-skipping class77
or getting into fights.'78
first of all:79
it's their job80
it's what they do.81
tattle-tell on82
the students.83
unless you can blackmail84
them to shut up.85
at my school86
it happens.87
mom wants me to explain myself.88
if I told her I skipped class just89
to be in detention, she'd probably laugh90
at me.91
I say nothing.92
I'm grounded to the second93
coming and told to do my homework.94
I mimick mom during 95
the trip to96
my room.97
***98
Fine99
Grandma checks in100
with a sandwich101
she sits at the edge of102
the bed near my naked feet.103
when I was little104
she'd tickle my toes105
and play 'this little piggy'106
now she just massages my feet.107
feels good.108
'West?' she says softly109
'Hmm?'110
'Everything alright at school?'111
'Yeah.'112
'Are you doing okay?'113
'I'm fine.'114
the end.115
this is how the conversation116
goes every time I'm punished.117
Jame comes to see me118
asks if things are okay119
here120
there121
everywhere122
I lie of course.123
as much as I love her124
I don't know how to 125
tell her the truth.126
***127
home for the weekend128
Stephen and Markus129
travel two hours 130
every Friday to be home131
for the weekend.132
I wish they'd stay at 133
college and drink up.134
dinner= boring talk135
because it's all 136
about137
them138
them139
them140
mom hops around 141
the kitchen142
making dinner143
I steal the brownies144
she made for them145
and go back 146
to my room147
***148
Author notes
posting more tomorrow!!!
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Comments
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I really like this. I do like this as much as - if not more than Eighteen Candles... possibly because you're building it up so bloody well!! It's really, really, intense already, you can feel the resentment for his family already and it's just incredible. Well done, sweetie xxx
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you are making me very jealous right now.
share your candy!!
<3
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lol. so far I'm really liking this one. a bit more than eighteen candles. maybe because my character is a guy
i think everything is starting out just a bit slow right now. hopefully the pace will pick up as I continue.
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Hehehehehe, West's a theifffff!!!!!!!!! What a bad boy
Stealing brownies... Hmm... I wish I had brownies... steals brownies...damn... Doesn't work... Oh well... I have a butterfinger, a heath bar and reeces cups
. They'll have to do... LOVE YOU
<3Kat -
i still am a fan of your writing style. i must admit that so far i don't find this one as gripping as i found eighteen candles however im still keen for reading the next parts
good work
~tara
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