Snow White Retold-The End

Contess:"My hair?What are you talking about?My hair is just-"1

She let out a shrill scream as she backed away from the cracked mirror.She fell to the floor and lay there curled up.2

Snow:"Father,we should do something.What is wrong with her?"3

Scarlett:"It's true.It's true!"4

Snow:"What's true?What are you talking about."5

Scarlett:"Grandma always told me that she gave the mirror to mother because she was of false noble blood.And that as long as she had this mirror she would be truly noble.But as soon as the mirror is touched by actual noble hands it would crack and she would soon die.We need to get her into the bed."6

Snow:"That is absurd."7

John:"Let's get her into the bed Snow."8

We picked her up and placed her into the bed.She lay there quiet,almost as if she wasn't able to speak anymore.I felt like this was all my fault.9

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The Contess died a few days later.Father stayed by her bedside even though he was furious with her.He hated to lose another wife to some strange sickness,as he had my mother.Scarlett went back to her palace with her husband,and I stayed with father.It's been about two years since I seen anyone who had helped me along the way.I wanted to pay a visit to Darvy,but I was afraid he wouldn't remember me.So,I sent a letter to him,and hopefully he recieves it.11

John:"Snow?Can you come down here for a second?"12

Snow:"Yes father?"13

John:"There is something that I need to talk to you about.Sit down.There is a man who has been mailing me letters for the past two years asking for your hand in marriage.At first I thought you were too young,but now I think you are ready.He will be arriving shortly,so go pack your things."14

Snow:"But father...I-"15

John:"No buts Snow."16

Snow:"As you say..."17

I slowly walked to my room,crying the whole way.How was I going to know if Darvy ever loved me.I couldn't marry this man that my father had chosen.I knew that my heart would never belong to him.18

John:"Snow?He's here."19

I walked behind the servants who were carrying my things with my head down20

Mystery Man:"Why so sullen my dear?Don't you recognize me?"21

I looked up and oo my...It was Darvy coming to marry me.22

Snow:"Darvy?You are the man who wants to marry me?"23

Darvy:"Only if you will have me."24

Snow:"I shall,and we shall live happily ever after."25

Darvy:"At least that's what they say."26

Author notes

Sorry it has taken so long to write an ending.I had very severe writers block.

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  • ScarletDreams
    March 25, 2006
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    lol, cute, who's going ot be the best man, or men? lol j/k nice ending, good read.
    SD


  • Beauty Sleeps
    February 28, 2006
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    Aw, this is so sweet! A wonderful ending to the story. Thank you for finishing it!
    Kate