cold murder

A beautiful woman with a bedazzling resplendent fancy clothing, gawdy ornate gold earings burst into the door, disheveled, with her hair messed up and shirt ripped, exposing her breasts, spilling out.1

Her normally gentle demeanor was instead pugnacious and egregious. Marijuana reeked on her clothes.2

Thirteen black crows in the distance flew away when she opened the window.3

Her kind feline rubbed against her leg.. She carressed it. The feline purred, emolitated at her touch, and moved closer towards her.4

But suddenly she looked at her companion with great pestilence because she pictured an amorphous tormenting black restless evil seeping through her cat, with a scythe, poised to kill her.5

An awkward silence hung in the now dense, dark, eery air.6

She snatched the poor beast and shook it vehemently.7

The cat scratched her.8

I knew the dame no longer9

She tenaciously picked up a knife and sliced open the cat's eye socket10

and a warm burgundy red liquid spurted out on her hand.11

She looked at it with an intense hatred and her world was saturated with red murderous intent12

The cycloptic cat approached the woman slowly and purred13

Its loving, kind, contrite eyes stupified her14

She wept and stroked the animal, looking at it with penitence, and let it go.15

She drunk some booze to calm her qualms.16

When her husband walked in.17

A violent wind ripped through and scattered a bunch of papers18

In a whirlwind of intense emotion...19

The booze had really perforated itself, chemically imbalancing her brain.20

Sodium bicarbonate? NITRIC ACID ammonium galactararium..HYDROCHLORIC ACID?helium phosphate? sodium tellurate Sodium bicarbonate ammonium galactararium..helium phosphate sodium tellurate barium GARBOZONATIC ACID!!21

Burning sulfurs heaped themselves on a red glowing Devil's Incarnate, the spawn of Lucifer, himself Her husband dropped off his suitcase in bewilderment at her murderous eyes, but rose up to embrace her22

She threw a clever at his heart and it nestled itself in his heart.?Her husband slumped to the floor, dead.23

With a half dead geezer, pale, crazed, insomiatic look, she grinned malevently, vehemently, and conspicuously, and headed toward her cat with a noose.24

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  • Melodies
    March 18, 2006
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    Amazing and gasping

    Huh? My eyes popped when I read this. Why can't I write like this?
    waaaaaa! I can only write swirly stuff! waaaaaaa!sniff
    but I can try, maybe...sigh. You are awesome! I don't even know all the words to write like you do. Somebody me!

  • EapRaven08
    March 3, 2006
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    very graphic indeed but i do like how you wrote this piece

    keep it up

    Andrea


  • Veronica Leigh
    March 2, 2006
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    wow. This was definatly graphic.... It was very well written.. but I have to say I can't be too much of a fan because I am a cat lover. But all in all it was a greatly put together story. You did a really good job with it!