You leaned up to kiss Gerard. Your lips brushed against a pillow. Gerard’s warmth was gone. He wasn’t there. Your eyes shot open. You turned and looked at the foot of the bed. Still no Gerard. The guys weren’t in the room. You couldn’t hear their snoring. The room smelled different. You looked down and saw rose petals on the blanket over you. You smiled to yourself.1
*That was sweet.* you closed your eyes and flung your legs over the side of the bed. You stepped down only to step on something hard. You looked down on the floor and saw hundreds of Hershey’s kisses on covering the ground mixed with even more red rose petals. You reached down and grabbed one unwrapping it and popping it into your mouth. White chocolate was your favorite. You kicked a small path through the chocolate and petals and when towards the stairs. Finding even more chocolate and petals after sweeping a path off of one stair you swept some of the next and so on all the way until you were at the top.2
*That’s a hazard…someone could step on one, freak out and launch themselves down the stairs….* You laughed to yourself. As you turned the door knob. 3
Across from the door Sat Gerard in a chair that looked like a throne. He was sitting leg resting on the other. Slouching back and playing with a candy rose. You stood there want looked at him. He got up and walked across to you giving you a big hug.4
*Gee, what was that all abo--* Gerard placed his lips against yours kissing you deeply. You kissed for a minute or so pulling apart to breathe. You looked at him and he smiled so widely.5
*Now that I’ve kissed the ground you walk on,* he got down on one knee. *Will you Marry me?* your heart stopped.6
Did you really want this?7
We’re you willing to be with him…forever?8
Did you really trust him enough?9
What should you say?10
Author notes
ohh. What do you say? What should you Say? What do you want to do?
THE ANSWERS TO THOSE QUESTIONS AND 'THE BIG QUESTION' Will be coming soon hang tight and keep commenting. i dont think this'll be done by 45. but it could well be!!!!
i know it's short. thats the point!!!!!
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*runs off to read 44* -
don't you want to know what her answer is? 44 is up
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44 is up..go check it out
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44 is up
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when shall we get more!???????????
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good times
I think I would have to say that I would think about it for a while. After a minute of thinking the answer would be YES, YES, YES, AND YES!!!!!!! She better say yes. I can't wait for the next chapter so put it up soon!!!!! -
I just read this for like the 4th time!!! Come on let's put up 44 now!! Need to know her response!!!
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you are so one of my favorite fans.
everyone is my favorite fans,.
if you spend the time to comment me you're a favorite fan! -
by the waysss
maybe I'm not a favorite fan but I'll so read anything you put out <3 -
omg, I luv this!!
I can't believe she kicked the chocolate kisses and flower petals out of the way >< lol
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Heh. Yah i do understand your critism of the latests chapters. and i do know a guy sweet enoguh to do that. i know two! i dated them both but broke up with one of them..long storyGee and her dad get along for a reason. i won't panic. and your cristisim is really in fact very helpful. i try to stay away from cliches. and i guess that was one of them! sorry! the miscarriage part has been in my mind for a long time. but you need to remember why he seems to get over it so fast. she didnt want the baby. she wasnt ready. Gerard kicked Frankie's ass because of the baby. and Gerard could have been crying instead of sleeping. you'll never know. I'm glad to know i'm one of your favorite writers and my next MCR fanfic will be GREAT. it'll be something you've never heard of before. with minimal cliche usage!!! i have good tihngs in mind for the ending of the stor and all of a sudden it seems likes its ending so soon so i'm going to put a few more twists and turns in. hopefully it'll get me to chapter 50! with no more complaints. but i do woory that once this series is over. all my favorite fans won't read my new ones. oh well... i'll figure this out somehow!!!
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OMG YOU HAD BETTER PUT THAT THE ANSWER IS YES. IF IT'S NOT I'M GOING TO CRY. the kitty wishes for the answer to be yet. *bows gracefully* thank you -
Did my last comment really hurt? Um... Sorry?? I don't feel the need to say sorry though... I mean, it was an opinion. Yes, it wasn't a great opinion, but it was a sincere one at least lol. And.. critics shouldn't hurt, should they? Well, it wasn't exactly a really constructive critic to say it was cliche, so.. I guess I'm gonna explain: Pregnant and, then, a miscarriagge (sp?)? If that really happened in reality, Gerard would be crying his eyes out at this very moment, not coming back home like if none of this never happened. He loved the baby, he had said it. And Cassie too, but maybe not as much as him: she wasn't very sure about this. And well... Let's just say that I didn't like the fact that she sang along with Gerard in the concert before, long to explain... lol?
But I must say I liked chapter 42. It was realistic the scene of Cassie's father apologizing, crying and all (The day my dad finally do that, I'll feel as complete and empty as she felt).. But.. strange thing that, suddenly, he gets along with Gerard, huh?
And talking about this chapter.. just.. cliche... Roses, candies.. Too sweet to be true lol (Or if youknow a boy who does these kind of things, tell me and I'll find him wherever he is LOL), and it's used in most of stories I read as often as my ass is grabbed.. and believe me, it happens REALLY often.. (haha, just joking.. I'm not a slut, I'd rather die before being on of them xD)
And yes, now I'll say 'sorry', becauuse this msg is very very very long, and I might have sounded very very very bitchy... But you know I'm not really lke that, it's just that.. I can't express myself in a different way. And, in spite of these kind of things I don't like about your writing, don't panic.. You'll always be one of my favourites writers
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I think the last sentence didn't hurt, did it? xD
DOn't get mad at mee, pleaseeeeeee
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OH GOD OH GOD!! SAY YES!!!
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YES SAY YES YOU FREAK OF NATURE, or me, or cassie, whoever, SAY YES *rotf* love the stair comment, makes it real and not all mushy and crap... lol
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