Erotic Adventures of Sarah

Sarah stood on the station platform waiting for the train to come in.  Such an important day and the train had to be late, bloody British Rail, she thought looking at her watch for the 10th time in a minute.  She had taken huge care with her appearance, new hairdo, a set of nails and a new outfit (as well as a new set of underwear!) She stamped her heels impatiently on the tarmac platform and started to pace.  She sighed thinking for the hundreth time that day that maybe this wasn't such a good idea.  What if he didn't like her? What if he got off the train and walked right past her when he saw her?  The thought made Sarah sick to the pit of her stomach, she had built this up so much in her head, what if he was disappointed when he met her?  She blinked away a rogue tear and took a deep breath.  There was no going back now, he was on the way, and even though she felt like running away she couldn't do it.1

In the distance the light changed to green and the station announcer said loudly "The Train from Newcastle to Crewe will be arriving in 13.22pm on platform 1" Sarah shivered uncontrollably and looked skyward for intervention.  The train started to pull up to the platform, going past Sarah and stopping at the top end of the platform.  Sarah debated whether to walk down to the front of the train, but she thought better of it.  She clenched her fists and walked in a circle trying to calm down.  She felt a tap on her shoulder and she turned around looking into a pair of beautiful hazel eyes.  2

"Hi Sarah, You look lovely!"  Sarah relaxed as she went into his arms and kissed him.  It was a simple kiss for the first one they would share.  Jon released Sarah and looked her up and down his eyes shining in fun.  He picked up his bag and took Sarah's hand.3

"Where to?"  He said, Sarah led him out to the taxi rank.  A taxi drew up to the kerb and they climbed inside.  The sun was hot and the inside of the car was stifling.4

"My house is about 5 miles from the station, so the easiest way to get there is in a cab."  Jon nodded, he was quiet, his eyes looking into Sarah's intently.  Sarah took a deep breath and blew it out. Jon reached across and squeezed her hand.  He smiled, lighting up his entire face.5

"Relax, we know each other by now.  You're beautiful."  Sarah blushed and lowered her head.6

"You act like no one's ever told you that before."  He said, his eyes never leaving hers.  She sighed.7

"No, not heard it for a long time."  He leaned across and claimed her mouth in a long and lingering kiss, his tongue teasing hers making her sigh in pleasure.  When they finally broke the kiss, Sarah laughed.8

"You going to do that again?"  Jon grinned.9

"Yes, all day and night if you want me to."  Sarah grinned relaxing finally in his company.  The taxi pulled into the carpark in front of Sarah's house, and they paid getting out.  "My house is just along that path there." Jon took her hand again and they walked the short distance to the front door.  Sarah closed the door and called out loudly.10

"Anyone home?"  There was no noise, apart from the black and white cat now circling her legs.  Sarah smiled looking down at the cat.11

"Jon, meet Missy."  Jon leaned down and stroked the cat.  Sarah turned back and smiled at him.12

"Looks like we have the house to ourselves!"  Jon kicked the door closed with his foot and reached for Sarah enfolding her in his arms and pining her against the wall in the hallway, he claimed her mouth his tongue teasing, his lips hard on hers.  Sarah moaned in arousal and reached for his hand, cupping it around her right breast.  His thumb started to teased the hard nub of her nipple through the cotton blouse she was wearing.13

"Wow, are you just gonna shag me in the hall then?"  She asked with a glint in her eye.  Jon laughed and let her lead him into the bedroom.  The room was quite big, full of clutter, but everything in it's place.  It was lived in, homely, dominated by a huge black wrought iron bed.  Sarah pulled Jon inside and pushed him down onto the bed.14

"Do you know how long I have wanted you in my bed?"  She asked breathless with arousal.  He laughed as she fell to her knees in front of him.15

"Probably about as long as I have wanted to be in your bed.  What are you doing down there?"  He asked his voice catching in his throat as Sarah started to unzip his trousers.  He supported himself with his arms as she took his erect cock out of his trousers and rubbed her thumb across the top.  He gasped as she licked her lips so they were wet. 16

"What do you want me to do to you?"  She asked her pink tongue snaking out once more and licking her lucious lips.  He took a deep breath, and reached with one hand for her head.  She smiled and moved her head with him until she was inches from his cock, her breath hot on the senstive skin.  Then all at once she took him inside her, Jon gasped as the hot, wet mouth began to suckle gently on him.  Her tongue was not still, licking and carressing the sensitive tip of his cock.  He gasped unable to support himself any longer, he lay back on the soft bed, giving himself up to her attentions.  She took her mouth from him blowing with a cool breath, he squirmed with the pleasure he felt.  Sarah reached for his balls and placed them on her lips.  She began to hum, the vibrations going through to Jon's balls made him cry out in arousal.17

"My god! What are you doing to me?"  Sarah sat up looking him in the eyes as she took him in her mouth once more.  She suckled him like a child would suckle a bottle, making a wet slurping noises.  Jon's hips began to buck off the bed as he started to cum.18

"I'm close, if you don't want to swallow then pull out now!"  Sarah laughed and continued to to suckled. Jon groaned loudly as he came filling Sarah's mouth with his hot, salty cum.  She swallowed it, licking what remained from his now deflating cock.  Jon sat up on the bed, smiling down at her.  Sarah rocked back on her heels and reached for him.  He enfolded her in his arms hugging her close.19

"Wow, that was fantastic.  Where did you learn to do that?"  Sarah laughed and climbed onto the bed beside him.20

"I'm all self taught!"  Jon laughed.21

"Well this is for the teacher."  He kissed her, tasted himself on her lips and tongue, it made him get hard once more.  He started to undo the buttons on her blouse reaching into feel the satin and lace of her bra.  Her breasts strained against their trap, begging to be fondled, caressed touched by his skillful hands.  Sarah sat up while he removed the rest of her clothes.  She lay naked, her cheeks blushing at his gaze.  He kissed her, his hands carressing her body, she moaned against his lips.  He moved his hand lower his fingers finding her hot, tight core.  He pushed 2 fingers inside her, and she gasped in pleasure.22

"What do you want me to do?" He asked mirroring her earlier question.  She moaned.23

"I want to feel your mouth on me, I want you to fuck me with your tongue, make me cum and to taste myself on your lips!"  He smiled and moved his mouth down her body, his breath making her squirm with the intensity of the feelings.  He lifted her legs until they were bent giving him easy access to her pink lips.  He sent out a quick, tentative lick at her clit.  She moaned loudly.24

"Oh yes! Mmmm, yes!"  Jon smiled and lowered his head again and started to lick and carress and tease her clit.  Sarah gasped in pleasure as he buried his head between her legs.  Her hips moved as she began to orgasm, her sweet juices filling his mouth, she grabbed the duvet with her hands as she screamed out in pleasure.  Jon continued to lap at her dripping pussy until he had licked her clean, then he raised himself up until he was over her.25

"Did you like that?"  He asked, Sarah's flushed cheeks and breathlessness told their own story. She nodded, unable to speak for a moment.  He smiled, and kissed her deeply, passing on the taste of her pussy to her.  He lowered his head and started to suckle on her tight nipples, she moaned in pleasure.26

"I want you inside me, fuck me Jon, fuck me hard!"  Jon caught her nipple between her teeth and teased it.27

"What, tell me again, what do you want me to do, beg me!"  Sarah groaned.28

"Please I want you inside me, fuck me Jon, make me scream your name!"  Jon's cock already erect touched her netherlips, teasing her clit.  Sarah moaned trying to push him deep inside her.29

"Fuck me Jon, please! Please!"  She begged almost sobbing in arousal.  Jon thrust forward and filled her throbbing pussy, making Sarah gasp.30

"Is that what you wanted?" He said his voice almost a growl.  Sarah moved her hips trying to push him deeper.31

"Yes, please Jon fuck me, fuck me now!"  He grabbed her hips and began to fuck her gently at first, the rhythm slower, getting faster, his thrusts deeper.  He moved his hands until they were carressing her breasts, making her moan.32

"Oh my God."  Sarah whispered as the feelings, the deep throbbing between her legs became almost too much for her.  Jon fucked her harder, his body banging against Sarah's in a deep pleasure/pain.  Sarah threw back her head as she began to cum, wrapping her legs around him.  His fingers moved lower, teasing at her clit, prolonging her orgasm.  Her deep muscles squeezed him as she cum again and again, screaming out his name, sobbing with the intensity of the feelings. Jon gave one last thrust and filled her with his warm wetness, falling forward onto her soft, hot body.  He lay there for a time getting his breath back, Enjoying the feeling of her body beneath him.33

"Wow! For a first time, that was mindblowing!"  Sarah laughed. 34

"We only used half an hour! We've got 2 whole days! Wanna go again?"  He laughed already getting hard within her.35

"Ok!"36


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  • Poetic Sunshine gold member
    March 1, 2006
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    Great write...I thought at first this was going to be a train ride story...I guess I was wrong..I like the switch going back to the house....Nice job........Thanks for entering my contest.......Heather


  • requiempoet
    February 24, 2006
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    Oh i see how it is Ms. Niky you enter in someone elses contest but not mine!!! *cries!!* BUT I LOVE YOU! it's ok fabulous woman you it's a great piece of writing!! LOVE YOU!

  • Goddess of Roses
    February 23, 2006
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    WHoa!

    *waves a fan* wow, hot and mindblowing. bravo

  • squishe
    February 23, 2006
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    ha ha jon's a geordie, like me. We geordies do give the best fuck. Im just messin, great write, loved the fact jon's a geordie, thats great, story was good too, glad sarah wasnt ignored


  • baby candy abc
    February 23, 2006
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    I thought it was absoultly brilliant!!! (i wanted to say bloody brilliant but i dunno if that would have worked with me) Anway, Awesome write except, in one line, " Her deep muscles squeezed him as she cum again and again," it sould have been came again and again. other than that.....LOVED it.
    lexie

  • Red Dragon
    February 23, 2006
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    I loved this

    I loved this, It was well written except the words that identified the author as having learned British English as opposed to American English. I personally don't care, but I'm pretty sure there's other Americans that would get a little disturbed by it. In America we don't say "bloody" unless we're actually talking about something that's actually covered in blood, and Americans never ever say the word "trousers" it just doesn't happen. Also the dialogue didn't fit well into the sentance/paragraphical structure, every time one of them talked I got confused as to which one of them was talking. I'm totally sure you could fix this because it just looks like the kind of oversight thing that happens when you try to write a story really fast. To prevent such a problem in the future I would suggest typing out and re-writing the stories on a word proccesser and then using a mouse to copy the story to here

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