the story of Elisa Barnes Part 3

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Laurie’s birthday is today. Today was the last party for Laurie until her sweet 16. Laurie is so excited, because on her last birthday it will be celebrated at the pool house. 2

Laurie’s party had started. Elisa didn’t like to swim so she just greeted people for coming to her little sister’s birthday party. All of a sudden a teenage boy named Carlton Shreds bumped into Elisa. They sat down and talked for a while. So that came into a big meet.3

Lucy is in the hospital for her labor. She had the baby 1 day after she was in the hospital. Lucy had a baby boy and his name is James Lee Barnes. She is tickling his little wrinkled feet.4

2 YEARS LATER5

Today is July 17th. Today is Elisa and Lisa’s sweet 16!!! They were so excited. Both of them had the party at the pool house and had nearly more than 76 teenagers over! Their parents were hoping the sweet 16’s wouldn’t get out of control.6

It was the big surprise. The surprise was a new car for each of them. They both got mustang convertibles. Elisa, Lisa, and the other teenagers were shouting. Everyone else in the mansion has something to cover their ears with. It is way to much clamor. 7

James was really sick! He has a fever of 104! Lucy has to take him to the hospital instantly. Once they got there the nurse took a look at him. 8

“He seems to have a killer flu,” the doctor stammered.9

The others gasped as they held in the bad feeling. After 6 hour in the hospital James lost breath and stopped breathing. Lucy panicked as she constantly stared at him. The doctor finally got a response from James and he was fine to go, but he is still sick so they have to watch out for him.10

Florida has been crushed! A hurricane has just hit that state. The Barnes family planned for a vacation to go to Disney World, but they can’t now. It was okay because they didn’t really want to go.11

One day Carlton came to Elisa’s mansion and asked if she would marry him, and she said yes. So Elisa and Carlton are going to get married. Elisa has tears of joy right now. She was so excited, because her mom’s dress fits Elisa perfectly.12

2 YEARS GO BY13

It was the wedding day! They said the I do’s and did the vowels. Next was the escape then the pictures. Then last was the reception. Later on they both went on their honeymoon to Jamaica. It is very fun there too.14

Today Elisa and Carlton Shreds decided to move to California. They both decided “yes”. So they found a house and now own it but they are moving tomorrow. They both packed and Elisa got her car ready then they took off.15

“Here we are!” They both shouted together. Then they laughed. They unpacked as soon as they both got inside. They sat down and watched TV together too.16

One day Elisa woke up sick. She knew she didn’t get the killer flu but it was something weird. She talked to Carlton and he didn’t know what is going on. So he told her that he is confused, but she is too.17

The next morning she went to the doctor. She has just found out that she is pregnant. Elisa was so excited and called Carlton. He was very excited too. When Elisa got home she got some things she put in the attic that was for babies and put them into the empty room.18

6 MONTHS LATER19

Elisa woke up and walked around. She looked into the mirror that was in a column, and went to fix her hair but then screamed. She was huge! Later on Carlton woke up and saw Elisa’s stomach… then… SCREAMED!!!20

Later on that day Elisa and Carlton went to the hospital. Elisa found out that she is going to have a girl. Carlton wanted to have a girl and so did Elisa. So they both got their way.21

Today is James’s birthday. He had a cute spider man creation there. They ate cake then played with water guns and water balloons. As soon as they finished the party was over.22

Elisa is now in the hospital. She tried to get some sleep but then had the baby. Elisa and Carlton decided to name her Patsy Lynn Shreds. Patsy is so cute.23

Elisa and Carlton got home and it’s Patsy’s first day. Patsy was grinning as she did everything like eating, playing, sitting, and when she sleeps. Everyone think that Patsy is the cutest baby of all. Elisa and Carlton agree.24

Lucy was sick again and knew that she was going to have her 12th child soon. Larry was outraged! He did want a baby but not now! Lucy told him to bad, because she wants another baby.25

Larry was okay about the baby thing but he had a weird feeling that something is going to happen to either Lucy or the baby, but he isn’t sure. He tries to tell Lucy but he is afraid to do that. Lucy was just eating and all of a sudden she feels a kick and laughs as she talks to the baby. She said that the baby will probably be like Patsy.26

Lucy is in the hospital and now she is going to have the baby soon. She has a hard time because she can’t breathe well. Finally the baby is out but Lucy stopped breathing, and the nurse can’t find a way to help her. The nurse tried everything they can but it’s not helping so she died. So that was the end of Lucy’s life.27