5 sences

Breaking through the branches, the teens ran through the trees, holding onto the little bit of hope they had remaining in their blood.  The hound dogs followed, barking and growling filled the night sky as the teens came upon a run-down shack, secluded in bushes and rusted wire.  Quickly, they jumped the fence and scuttled around the building, panting, wheezing, out of breath, but safe.1

Matt grabbed Amuyi's hand, still panting as they heard the Hound dog's growls grow closer.  Pulling off his shirt, Matt wrapped the cloth around his hand and found a cracked window. Breaking it in, he boosted his girlfriend up and into the opening just as the ferocious dogs ran into sight.  Amuyi screamed as she watched her beloved tackled by the mutts and taken to the ground.  Struggling and kicking, the dogs clamped their jaws down onto his arms, legs and neck, ripping the flesh right off his bones as his blood curdling screams filled the skies and his fluids leeched onto the ground.  With all of his strength, he looked at his girl, petrified in fear at what she was witnessing, he tried to speak but a gun shot rifled through the night and there, in a puddle of blood, lay her love, dead and cold.  His open eyes were empty as the dogs continued their mutilation.2

Amuyi ducked, only her eyes were noticeable, as a heavy set man walked into view, holding the very rifle which finished off her love.  Frightened, yet angry she continued to watch as he kicked her dead man's body.  The man squatted down and searched Matt's pockets.  Standing up disappointed and empty handed, he left the remains for his dogs, which happily played tug-of-war with a chewed off arm.  Amuyi slowly stepped backwards, the floorboard  creaked.  She stopped, her heart pounding in her ears, as her eyes set on the man's silhouette.  His ears perked up as he spun around, spying the crouching girl.  A deathly grin creeped onto his face as he grimly cooed, "Sick her" to his hounds.  They immediately let go of the bloodily parts of Matt's body and growled, blood dripping from their cheeks, their lips, licking it off, feasting on the blood of her fallen love, she turned and ran through the shack as the dogs leaped through the broken window.  Tripping over a notch in the wood floor she looked down, noticing it was a trapped door and she flung it open, rapping two of the dogs on the head with the heavy wood and disappearing underneath it, into it's dark corners. 3

Stepping down it's steps, she slowly tiptoed into the darkness.  Suddenly, torches on the sides of the cobblestone walls came alive,  lighting her view.  In front of her lay the most horrible sight she had ever seen.  The small, cobblestone room was cold but stained red.  Weapons of all kinds were hung from the wall, priding their purpose and telling their tells of death and blood.  In the center of the room stood a wooden contraption, about 7 feet high, equipped with steel belts and sharp ends.  Amuyi slowly stepped around the contraption, examining it's potential, fear dancing through her eyes.  She stepped back and took  look around the room.  She glanced at a small window at the top of the wall with a window well surrounding it.  She gasped at the sight of skeletal remains laying in it's hole.  Suddenly, she heard a "thud" outside the window and turned to look at it's gruesome content when she came face to face with her dead boyfriend.  Fresh blood coated the old, dried blood on the window where he had slid down it, his eyes, still paralyzed open and now staring straight at Amuyi.  her heart dropped down into her stomach as she stumbled backwards and into a tray of steel needles, all with dried blood on them, all which fell onto the floor.  She screamed, spinning around only coming face to face with her next challenge, the heavy man who shot her love.  He briskly strided to her in 2 steps and before she could move, he stabbed her in the chest with a needle, filled with blue liquid.  she tried to scream bu her lungs couldn't move, she collapsed onto the floor, heaving for air as her body wanted to die but her heart wouldn't let her.  The man picked her up and strapped her to the contraption in the middle of the room.  4

She couldn't move.  All she could do now was watch.  Her senses had heightened, her muscles had shut down but her heart was pumping like mad.  "Adrenosyl."  The man stated calmly, pacing back and forth in front of her.  He glanced at the weaponry wall and strided over to it.  "As you have noticed, it's a drug, invented by me, that shuts down the muscle system and makes your senses more... awake..."  He smiled devilishly as he picked a serrated blade from the wall, glimmering in crimson blood which laced it's edge.  "In other words," he continued, "you feel greater pain and you won't die until you have seen the loss of blood on the ground below you and have felt every cut, every slice, and every chop into you..." And with that, he swiftly moved to her and penetrated the stained blade into her arm and ran it down the course of it.  Amuyi couldn't move, she couldn't struggle or scream, all she could do was watch and feel her body being dismantled.  Her skin stood up as she watched him return to the wall and come back with a bigger blade, this of which he threw onto the arm of the chair, cutting off her hand, squirting blood clear across the room.  The man threw back his head in cruel laughter as her eyes screamed out in pain, she was helpless and couldn't do anything but suffer.  "Touch." the man grimly cooed.  Next, he grabbed the same blade used to slice her arm and wrenched open her mouth.  he grabbed her tongue and reached down and retrieved 4 needles she had earlier knocked to the floor.  He found a pool of her own blood and filled each of the four with it, then held her tongue, smiled grimly and stabbed them right through it.  Her eyes screamed to the heavens, pain beating through her paralyzed body, unable to move.  He took the knife blade and sliced through half of her tongue, then smiled and pulled on it, ripping the remaining connected half right from it's place.  "Taste."  He again cooed grimly.  Enjoying himself, he walked to the side of her face, only being able to swivel her eyes, she followed him as he mumbled into her ear some cure words then bit down hard into it.  Her eyes screamed to the gates of hell as, with his teeth, he ripped her whole ear off, spitting out the bloody chunk of flesh.  He walked over to her other ear and bit into this one as well, this time, swallowing the bloody flesh.  "Hearing."  He walked over and grabbed another needle.  Stepping over to the window where her dead love lay in a pile of bone and blood, he opened the window and stabbed him with the syringe.  Extracting his blood, he closed the window and returned to her side.  He clamped her nose closed and stabbed the needle filled wit her love's blood through the bridge of it, so she could smell his death.  Then he pulled a razor from his pocket and placed it on the tip of her nose and bean to carve chunks of bloody tissue from it.  She tried to shut her eyes but couldn't,t her muscles would not give.  She watched in panic as he sliced off her nose, piece by piece until he reached the needle.  "Smell."   Her mind was racing, her eyes were fearful as she couldn't do anything to save herself.  Her touch, was gone, Her Taste, was gone, Her hearing,gone, Smell, gone, one thing was remaining...  5

She followed him wit her eyes as he walked casually over to his desk again, pulling out two thumb screws from the drawer.  Attaching them to his fingers, he walked back over to her.  Leveling his fingers with her eyes, he slowly reached towards her, her pupils dilated, she tied to pull away, she tried to fight back but she couldn't move, she had to watch it.  His hand drew closer and she watched as the pointy screws stabbed into the corneas of her eyes.  Her body was screaming, she was left in the blackness of her blood as it spilt down her face.  She knew what he was going to say.  "Sight."  6

She was helpless,she didn't know what was to come next.  She felt her chest stabbed again as her muscles were injected with a red, burning fluid.  he released her and she fell onto the floor, screaming and twisting in pain.  The room filled with her cries as she felt her heart beating faster and faster, committing suicide against her ribcage.  With a final scream, her heart exploded and her insides filled with blood.  She finally lay silent, bleeding from everywhere.7

The man looked at her with a sneer on his face then walked to the door, clapping his hands so the torches went out, leaving her body in it's bloody mess, in silence and in darkness.8