Happy Birthday Master.... part 2

entering His house for the first time, kanazia once again felt a shyness overcoming her. her Master led her to the living room where He took a seat on the couch. He had her stand before Him. wanting to put her more at ease, He reached for her  hand and pulled her towards Him and down to His feet. looking down upon her, He smiled and ran His hand through her hair. He leaned down and kissed her upon her forehead.1

" are You sure you want to learn to serve Me?" He asked her while looking deep into her eyes. "if you want to back out, we will remain friends and you are still welcome here."2

without hesitation she answered her Master's question.3

"yes Sir, i do want to serve You and please You. this is really something i want to learn to do."4

lifting her head up towards Him, He smiled to show that He was pleased with her response, but He would have respected her wishes to back out. He knew He loved her, but He didn't want an unwilling submissive.5

" then stand and strip for Me."6

slowly she rose to her feet and began removing her clothes. fighting the urge to look down in shame, she kept her eyes on His and His look of approval encouraged her.7

standing before Him naked, she waited His next instruction as His eyes traveled over her body in approval. 8

" spread your legs." He instructed her. as she complied, He lifted His hand up between them and felt how wet she was. she was ready to continue her training. she had done well with the dildo in the car, never stopping and her groans of frustration let Him knew when she was ready to climax, and yet she managed to stop herself as He had instructed her. 9

standing up, He told her to follow Him.10

He lead  her through the house to His kitchen, where He took out His keys and unlocked a door. they went through the door and down the stairs to the basement. in the basement, she saw the *toys* He had waiting there for His use upon her.11

she had never seen a basement set up as this one was. she tried to hold her breath as her eyes wandered around the room, daring not to look too long and hard at the cuffs and chains suspended from the ceiling, or the table over to the left. she was trembling a bit, but she knew she didn't want to call it off, she really wanted to be His slut, serve Him, give herself up to Him.12

He took her to the middle of the room, where He placed her wrists in the cuffs. bending down, He placed her legs in shackles that she hadn't noticed before. walking behind her, He rubbed His hands up and down her backside, giving her ass a slap. He spread her ass cheeks and traced a finger along the crack. with another smack to her ass, He walked away.13

coming back, He stood behind her. " since this is your first time, I will go easy on you, as time goes along, you will learn to take more pain to please Me. we will build you up."14

" yes Master." she barely whispered in reply.15

she heard before she felt the sting that landed on her ass next. biting down on her lips, she drew blood but was proud of the fact that she didn't cry out and therefore, drawing her Master's displeasure in her. sting after sting fell upon her ass as she bit down harder on her lips, straining not to cry out or to pull away. the whip bringing welts on her tender skin, dancing a dance that she had never felt before and while she was in pain, she was also feeling something stronger, something that she didn't know how to describe, something that made her want her Master even more, want whatever He wanted to do to her.16

after a few minutes of using the whip, her Master came over and checked on her to see if she was able to handle the pain. with tears streaming down her eyes, she smiled at Him through her swollen cracked, bloodied traced lips at Him. that was her answer to His unasked question. He knew that she would hold up well and was what He wanted.17

He removed her from her cuffs and shackles. with His hands upon her back, He guided her to the table He had made and erected for His submissives. without being told, knowing from His look what He wanted, she crawled upon the table, placing her stomach over the raised part and therefore, presenting her ass to Him. again her Master cuffed her wrists and ankles, so that she was bound to the table, bound to Him.18

going to His workbench, her Master, removed a few items He would be using on her, came back and stood behind her. she felt a warm liquid wash over her back and ass as He pour lotion onto her skin. He rubbed the lotion around her back, moving His powerful hands down to her ass, rubbing the lotion in her crack and over her asshole. 19

picking up an item He had placed next to her, yet out of her eyesight, she felt as He plunged a butt plug deep into her. crying out from the sudden, unexpected intrusion, she pushed her head down onto the table to try and muffle her cry, squeezing her eyes shut against the sudden rush of tears of she felt springing to her eyes.20

satisfied with her reactions, and with the plug being secured, her Master next picked up His paddle and gave her ass a few rough slaps. feeling the heat in her ass, kanazia, bit down again upon her lips to control the screams at the back of her throat. her Master watched and enjoyed the sight of her ass wiggling, shaking under each blow, He admired the redness and pattern His paddle was making. the way her skin would sink in with each strike and bounced back up when the paddle was removed. all in all, her Master was very pleased with His slut. He knew she would be able to handle this and she would grow to handle more.21

after several more blows, her put down the paddle and walked around to her head. unzipping His pants, He withdrew His cock and positioned His body in front of her.22

" would My slut like a drink?" He grinned down at her.23

barely able to talk between her cracked lips, she looked up at Him. " yes Master, please."24

" are you willing to work for it?"25

" oh yes Sir."26

kanazia opened her mouth as her Master shoved His cock deep inside. taking His full length, she began sucking hard, tightening her jaw muscles around Him to give Him a tight feeling as He began to fuck her face. thrusting in and out of her mouth, her Master felt Himself on the verge of climaxing. grabbing a tight hold of her hair, with a final thrust, He released His seed deep down her throat. kanazia eagerly drank in every drop, savoring the taste and the warmth of Him.27

removing His cock from His slut's mouth, without saying a word, He walked again behind her, picking up His crop this time. He rubbed the handle of His crop up and down the small of her back, and into her crack, watching with amusement and approval as His slut started rubbing up against it, wanting to feel it against her body. with a suddenness that she wasn't expecting, He withdrew it from her skin and raised it up into the air, letting it fall down on her. using His crop, He rained blow after blow upon her tender, sore skin. even though she tried to hold it in, a few muffled screams escaped her as she tried to remain still during her Master's onslaught.28

putting His crop down, her Master was please with His sluts first lesson. He removed the plug from her, released her from the cuffs and helped her up from the table. holding her close to Him, He ran His fingers down her face, and smiling down into her eyes, He placed an arm around her shoulders and drew her to Him. she had given Him the best gift He could received for His birthday, she had given herself to Him. kissing her on her lips, He led her from the room and up the stairs, where He was planning on taking her to His bedroom to let her have her reward.29

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  • mcfreeman
    June 16, 2008
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    Great adventure here

    I could learn much from such a willing learner.

    beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.

  • broken beauty
    March 29, 2006

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    this was so awsome it flowed really well with the rest of the story, i even found at one stage i wanted to be his slave to....

    beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 4.


    • shimmer
      March 29, 2006
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      lol.. shh i think i kind of wrote this around my Dom... i did write it right before His birthday, and this girl aint a sharing......lol just kidding but thank you for the comments and i'm glad you liked it.


  • kummie
    March 8, 2006
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    This was a awesome story sis, but you cant leave us hanging. There has got to be a part 3..lol

  • shimmer
    February 23, 2006
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    Thank you for your comments and your suggestions, I have read several of your works and so to me it really says a lot that you did comment. Later when I do have the time, I will take a second look and see what I can do to make it stronger and better.


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    February 22, 2006
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    Excellent write hon.. however, one or two suggestions. The paragraphs are great but you should reread this and the first piece with an editorial eye or at least as a proofreader. There are some places that need tightening up. I know that I do this on a regular basis for my work and it makes it that much better and easier for others to read.

    Other than that... please keep these stories coming. This is a great piece of work and I love reading these items.


  • shimmer
    February 21, 2006
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    thank you for reading and commenting and if i do continue it, i will let you know.

  • shimmer
    February 21, 2006
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    lol thank you for reading it and taking the time to comment. i'm glad you liked it. i may do a part three, but i don't know, i haven't really thought about it.


  • Twisteddolly
    February 21, 2006
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    oooh that was very exciting, Both part were. Intense and Sexy! please let me know if you continue with it...Excellent...

    Jessica

  • caesarjager
    February 21, 2006
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    This is really good, I heavent read part one yet but I think you should do a part three too, this is hot hot HOT!

  • shimmer
    February 21, 2006
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    thank you for taking the time to comment, i wasn't planning on doing a part three but i guess i can see where i could make one.

  • shimmer
    February 21, 2006
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    thank you for the contest and the comments, i hadn't planned on doing a part three, i wrote these two on the spur of the moment last night, not sure where i would go with it.

  • sneakers
    February 21, 2006
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    this is very good.
    i hope your going to be doing a part 3
    sneakers

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe
    February 21, 2006
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    Another good write. Although the way you left it, one might think there will be a part 3 to this....anyway, I enjoyed reading this and thank you for entering this as well.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*

  • queenmab
    February 20, 2006
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    bravo!!!!

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