I miss you

I miss you1

Sweet love2

Sweet night3

My love lorn dove4

You taught me to love again5

Taught me to be free6

I always laugh when you're around7

I'm never sad when you're with me8

When we're apart9

I grow distant and cold10

But when I see your face11

Into your arms I fold12

I miss you13

Sweet love14

Sweet star15

My love lorn dove16

I will hold you in your sleep17

Comfort you in your pain18

I love you darling one19

You'll never be alone again20

May the world stop turning21

May the night never end22

I would spend an eternity with you23

My very best friend24

I miss you25

Sweet love26

Sweet heart27

My love lorn dove28

Author notes

For my buddy in Iraq

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  • CallMeWhenUrRich
    August 24

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    Awwwwww, this was incredibly sweet.

    I loved the layers of emotion in this piece and how sweet and romantic it was. I went awwww....

    Great job and I'd love to read more from you!!!


  • Yemassee gold member
    February 28, 2006
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    A ton of sentiment here, I too hope you get to see your friend soon. It does indeed hurt to be far away from them, I've been there, in fact my love is across the ocean too. Thanks for entering the contest.


  • Mari Goes
    February 26, 2006
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    A very romantic poem. To miss someone we love hurts, but to keep those feeling inside is great and comforting
    I hope you get to see him again soon
    All the best to you always,
    Mari

  • sidewinder
    February 26, 2006
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    ah those fond memories that hold dear to our heart when we need them most.
    Thank you mu friend for remind ing me!
    Keep penning on on stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • Cly
    February 20, 2006
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    Good

    Awwww. Sweet. I don't really do sweet. But it's still good.

    P.S. I get a sneaking suspicion you like to read Atwater-Rhodes. We have that in common. Now if you'll excuse me, Aubrey, I think I may go write a vampire story.

    ~Cly~

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