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RAPE...3
Alone -or- so I thought [while] driving my car; suddenly I felt a knife up against my jaw.4
Before I got too far, off the road [all I could hear was...] "Turn left, turn left, turn left." 5
I followed his instructions went to where he lead feeling scared and out of place. I did everything he said.6
There were so many crazy thoughts just going through my head; I pulled up to where he told me and then came to a stop. He pulled me to the backseat, then he climbed on top.7
Fear was running through my veins, my body filled with all these pains... He was totally in control, And I, was filled with pain anger, and hate. Now, there's only darkness, silence, I couldn't even cry.8
Bruised, broken, bound, hurt, and abandoned in the back seat, he raped, he stole, he took, my innocence, my dignity, he would not hear my pleas. But, suddenly, disgustingly that pig, he was through with me. Finally it was over; it felt like eternity.9
My life will NEVER be again what it used to be only hate lives inside me; a hate that will never die, it's only growing stronger as my days go passing by.10
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I no a few people who have been raped and I appreciate how you capture what's going through their heads.
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Thank you for enjoying my write.....
Blessed be,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
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Hope This is Not True
Prego questo sono il vostro linguaggio figurato e non allineare. È una delle cose più difettose che possano accadere ad una donna o ad un uomo. Avete scritto bene la storia, esso lo avete incitato a relive che cosa quasi accadono me. Ringrazi il dio che il mio brothe è venuto al mio pozzo di salvataggio indossa....novy
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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The worst part is after it happens. That feeling you cant get rid of or shake off. Try not to let that keep you down or he will have controlled your fate.
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That was awesome the way you wrote that keep up the wonderful work i loved how u made it seem so real and i really hope this didnt happen to you but well done i loved it alot wonderful job!
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I got to tell you that I really love this poem. The rhyming scheme is excellent, the meaning is brilliant (some people write without emotion but you do) and it really works well... I think it's a really good poem and describes the situation well... Also like the font,
Stef
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3 Stars ***
Rape.. its one of the most disgusting and pathetic and creaulest crime of all... It just destroys the person who has been raped.... people who commit such a vice should be given the worst possible punishment so that no other person might ever dare to rape anyone... i myself have met many girls on this site who have been raped, and the changes that i have seen in them... even though i dunno the guy who raped my friend.. i almost hate him...
this is a very important subject for the world to look upon, to think and ponder upon and most importantly to ACT upon..
nice write.. good write... thanks for sharing my dear friend... just keep it up... your humble little friend...
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o wow this is really good
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Excellent
Such a powerful and tear jerking tale. I wish rape was just an imaginary thing never to truly happen. Alas, in the world we live in, it's as common as flat tires. Too freakign common. My heart goes out to you, dear Lady. -
Very very sad and emotional! As you said, rape is such a vile, ugly thing! I will never understand how someone can hurt another human being like this! Sigh.....
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Highly fantastic
This so beautiful...after a while I was breathless this poem is so unique....I am really happy what you wrote..it's wonderful.
Love Always SamaraElla.
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I am speechless and my heart is yours. If you want, use mines mi cielo madrina. Applause. I couldn't see a lot of the background but the poem read fine.
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