This 3 member family is poor. They have one daughter which is Elaine, and she is always begging for help. Alicia is the mom and she is always out in the streets asking and begging for money. George is the dad, and he is always looking for someone to take Elaine so that she would have a real life.1
Today was day one for Elaine to go with her mom to ask for money. George was at the Child Welfare. They told him to try and keep Elaine until they found help. 2
A few hours later… Elaine and Alicia finally got back to the alley. They looked through the trash and found some left over fish. So that was dinner for that night. George talked to Alicia about the welfare. Alicia freaked!3
A few days later… the child Welfare took Elaine and she got a new home until George and Alicia got more money. So then she met her new mother. She loved her new brothers and sisters too.4
A few years later… George and Alicia got money. So Elaine got sent back home. They got a house, car, and they all got a life. That family lived happily ever after in the new search of a new life.5
The End 6
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My name is falicia. Neat.
Though I don't exactly get much else from this story.
Slow it down and write more or something.
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I am glad u liked it!
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dear jacinda i loved your story and i loved when they got a better life
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