lesson learned

Quietly entering the room, she moved over to the window. Glancing out into the night, feeling the cool air caressing her cheek, sighing she lowered it. Pulling the blinds and drawing the curtains shut, she checked to make sure that no light escaped the room into the night. She knew it wouldn't do for the neighbors to be able to see what went on in this room.1

Noticing the time, she realized she only had a few minutes to prepare for her Master's arrival. She wanted everything just right, the way He had told her to have things. Going around the room, she lit each candle that were mounted along the walls in their scones. Staring into the flames, she hoped that Master wouldn't use wax as part of her punishment tonight, She did not like wax play but knew that tonight was not the night to even act as if she objected to anything. Her mouth was the reason she was now in trouble. Her boldness with her Master, her flippant remarks to Him this past few weeks. It wasn't the words He used on the phone when He called to tell her how He wanted her to be ready for His arrival home, but the tone in which He spoke to her that let her know that tonight was the night that she would pay for her misbehavior. Tonight she would be punished for her mouth. 2

Moving to the center of the room, she kneeled upon the concrete floor. On her knees with her legs slightly apart, she lowered her upper body down so that her breasts were pressed upon the floor, drawing the coldness from the concrete into her body, the roughness scratching her bare skin. She stilled herself as she heard her Master open the front door. Daring not to move, she felt His presence more then heard or saw Him as He came to the doorway of the room.3

Master stood in the doorway looking upon His slut. Without a word, He walked behind her and not totally pleased with her position, He placed His foot between her legs and kicked them further apart. She tried not to squeal as the concrete dug into her skin, scraping her legs and knees. Noticing her discomfort and pain, Master once again used His foot to spread her legs a little bit further.4

As she lowered her back more to support her new position, her cunt became more exposed to her Master's eyes as He stood back to evaluate her form. Stepping in closer, He placed His foot under her and began to rub the toe of His shoe back and forth upon her exposed lips. Shivering, the slave tried not move but almost against her will, she felt herself rubbing up against His foot. Watching His slut, her Master let her enjoy the friction of His foot against her cunt. He watched as she became greedy and tried to scoot her pussy lower so that she could mount the toe of His shoe.5

Amused at the sight, He let her enjoy herself for a moment before drawing His foot away. Leaning down, He grabbed her by her hair and gave it a jerk so that her head shot up. 6

"Did you have permission to enjoy yourself with My foot?" He asked her in a firm tone.7

"no Master." His slave whimpered.8

"And yet this was what you were doing?"9

"i'm sorry Master, it won't happen again."10

Giving her hair another quick jerk, He released her and watched as she quickly lowered it back down to the ground.11

She heard as He moved away and walked over to the far corner of the wall, the wall where He kept His toys to be used upon her. Some of His instruments were lined up on the wall, while others were lined on a shelf. She was not allowed to touch them but knew what was there. She heard Him as He picked up and lowered the items He rejected for His session with her tonight. 12

After a few moments He came back to her. She heard as He lay things on the ground beside her, but she was unable to see what He had chosen for her. Master ran His strong fingers along her ass, spreading her cheeks with His firm hands. She tried not to flinch as she felt a cold object pressing against her anus. With a swift movement, her Master inserted the object into her pussy. He penetrated her a few times with this unseen object, and as she began to moan with the sudden desire she felt rising in herself, He removed the object and as His slut drew in a sharp breath, He quickly pushed it up her ass. He watched as she shuddered at the sudden invasion, and smiled to Himself when He saw how her ass closed around the sphere of the metal plug. He knew that thickness and length was causing her pain as she was not used to this. He tapped the base to make sure it was firmly inserted and satisfied with the results, He moved in front of His slut and grabbed her by the hair, pulling her up into a kneeling position before Him. Smiling down at her, He watched the expression of pain as it played across her face as the plug tore more into her when she shifted positions and placed more weight upon it.13

Reaching down beside her, Master picked something up off the floor, something that He had placed there when He brought back the toys. She saw the clamps as He moved His hand in front of her, and reaching down he lifted her breasts and clamped the nipples of each one. He screwed the clamps so they were pinching her nipples tight. Enjoying her pain, He again reached over her side and picked up His crop. He held one of her breasts in His hands as He teased her with the end of the crop, running it lightly between her cleavage, around her nipples and along her breasts. As Tthey both watch, Master's slut not only felt, but could see her nipples hardened with His attention. Quickly her Master raised His crop and brought it down upon her left breast, leaving a bright red mark. Over and over again He let the crop dance upon her breast, leaving its mark in her skin. The slut cried out as the pain shot through her, but He ignored her cries as He made the crop continue its dance. He lifted her other breast and once again began His cropping upon her bare breast. The slut tried not to flinch with each blow, for she knew how that would upset her Master, and her body she tried to keep still as a rod.14

When her Master was satisfied with His marks, He petted her head to let her know He was pleased how she controlled herself. Wishing to reward her for not crying out loud and not moving away, He lowered the crop and began to play it upon her wet cunt. He slid the handle in and out of her and her moans of pleasure let Him know her arousal state. He nodded at her and asked if there was anything she wanted.15

"please Master, please Sir, fuck me with Your crop. fuck me hard and deep." she whimpered as her hips slowly began to rise and fall, taking in more of the handle.16

"you may enjoy the play, but remember you do not have permission to cum." He told her.17

He held the crop still as His slut fucked herself on it. Each time she lifted, He could see the wetness upon the handle, proof of her mounting desire.18

Without warning, He removed the crop and hearing her whimper, He told her that she was being greedy, but maybe if she was good, He would grant her permission later to cum.19

Taking her head into His hands, He leaned over and placed a kiss on her forehead. Then He pushed her back down to her original kneeling position so that her clamped nipples hugged the floor. Moving behind her, He again checked the plug, making sure it was secured in her ass. Standing up, He raised His crop up into the air and let it fall upon her ass. Over and over again it landed with force, making a beautiful contrast between the whiteness of her skin and the bright red marks. A contrast that He enjoyed. The pattern becoming more visible with each strike, the redness almost glowing with the heat of His hits. Unseen by Him, tears ran down His slut's cheeks, as she tried to hold the cries within, but letting a few escape her body. She tried not to clench her cheeks, for not only did it intensified the pain of the plug buried deep within herself, but it would also make the crop's pain more severe. This took more skill then she possessed and her cheeks bounced a little with each blow of the crop. 20

After a few more minutes of whipping her ass with His crop, her Master again moved before her. He pulled her once more to her knees by her hair and unzipping His pants, He moved before her kneeling form. Positioning Himself in front of her willing mouth, He told her to open it.21

Doing as He bided her, His slut opened her mouth, grateful for the break in the cropping. Her tongue darted out to lick His head as He moved His cock into her eager mouth. Grabbing her by the back of her head, He began fucking her mouth, rocking her head steadily back and forth upon Him. 22

As she tightened her jaw's muscles around Him, His moans told her that Master was pleased with her. With this approval, she began to suck Him faster, not needing His hands to guide her head, she was moving it back and forth on her own, wanting to taste Him and His juice, hoping that He would not deny her this pleasure. Relaxing her throat so she could take Him in deeper, she was rewarded with a taste of His precum. With a final jerk of Her head, He thrust His cock all the way in the slut's mouth, cumming deep in her throat. His slut greedily drinking in His juice, enjoying the hotness of it as it went down her throat, enjoying the taste of Him.23

Smiling down at her with approval, He withdrew His cock, and again picked up the crop where He had dropped it. Stepping back, He kicked her legs far apart so that her ass came down even more upon the intrusive plug, causing her to wince in pain. 24

Lifting His crop, He grinned at her as He began to rain blows down upon her quivering thighs. Tears sprung unbidden to her eyes, running unchecked down her cheeks. Angry welts began to rise as He showed no mercy on her, as blow after angry blow fell on her. Biting her lips to hold in her cries, His slut tasted that salt of the droplets of blood that was forming there, still with all of her might, she managed to keep her body still. Up and down her thighs His crop landed, each mark brighter then the last, the sound of it slapping against her skin screaming in her ears. 25

After several minutes of this attack, His slut was not sure she could stand anymore as she felt herself becoming weak from the pain. Against her will, she started to weave on her knees. Her Master seeing this, knew that He had pushed her to her point of pain and let the crop drop to the floor as He took her into His arms. Looking into her eyes, He also knew that she would not forget this day and so His lesson to her had been absorbed. As He moved behind her to pull the plug out of her ass, He knew that it would be a long time, if ever, before she started smarting off to Him again. 26

Taking her hands, He pulled her to her feet, and holding her against Him, He lead her out of the room, towards their bedroom where He knew she would be grateful for the reward He had in mind for her. He had a feeling her lesson was well learned this night.27

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  • mcfreeman
    June 17, 2008
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    Great little piece, this.

    wonderful detail and the pace is like a slow motion film.
    Very visual.

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 3.

  • broken beauty
    March 29, 2006

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    i think that the only problems that i have with your storys is that you dont let us here what happens when they return the favour to their 'sluts'...otherwise this is really great work..keep it up...

    beginning: 5, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 3, dialog: 5, characters: 4.


    • shimmer
      March 29, 2006
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      i never really thought about it, i like to leave a little to the imagination i guess, maybe one day will try to continue some of them. thanks for commenting and i'm glad you liked my stories.

  • shimmer
    March 4, 2006
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    as many times you have jumped into my mind, you should know how it works by now. thanks sis, huggss and a few gropes


  • kummie
    March 4, 2006
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    This was an awesome story! why didnt you tell me you had a devious mind like this? lol.. All kidding aside it was wonderfully written and you so deserve the trophy you got for it. Congrats huggss


  • March 1, 2006
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    damn this is good and hot.

  • shimmer
    February 24, 2006
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    thank you for the allowing prewrites in the contest. to me, this is one of my favorites that i managed to do on here. thanks for the kind comment.

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe
    February 24, 2006
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    Very good story that you have written, I enjoyed reading this very much. Thank you for entering it into the contest, and for sharing this with us.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*

  • queenmab
    February 18, 2006
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    comment slut LOL that's great
    me too actualy

  • shimmer
    February 18, 2006
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    lol, i'm glad you liked it so much. thanks so much for commenting on it since i am a comment slut and love getting them. smiles and again thanks.

  • queenmab
    February 18, 2006
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    i've read this before and it was very good then as it is now
    but i thought i'd comment to let you know that i decided to read it again cuz it's that damn good

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