Well, Open the Treasure and See

This family is very rich, but there are only 5 members of this family. There is the mom Shirley. The dad Michael, the 2 twin teens Shelby and Selby. Then of course the smallest newest Marilyn. 1

       Shirley was just in labor. With Marilyn the sweetest child of the family. Marilyn was in her crib sleeping. As Shelby walked up she got her drink and went to her baby sister’s crib. 2

        “What are you doing Shelby?” Selby asked.3

      “Oh, just looking at our new baby sister,” Shelby answered.4

     “Ah,” Shirley yawned.5

      Well that was the family till they were asleep. Marilyn cried ever since 3:00 in the morning and it is now 7:30am. Marilyn was just fed and fell asleep for her afternoon nap.6

       The next day Shelby and Selby were taking a walk to the park with their child they baby-sit. They stayed at the park till it got dark. As soon as the child’s mom picked her up. Shelby and Selby went to their teenager dance class down the street from the park.7

     Class was almost over with the toddlers. So Shelby and Shelby got ready for their gymnastics class that they teach the grade school kids. One child named Sierra was perfect in gymnastics and she was only in 5th grade. So the dance teachers voted to let her go into the high school gymnastic class. They all agreed too.8

         The dance building was closed for the day. So everyone went home. Shelby and Selby went to their house. As soon as they got there… Marilyn was shouting as she cried so hard. So Shirley had to give Marilyn her pacifier. Finally she stopped crying. Then all 5 of them went to the Mall.9

           The Mall was packed!!! Everything was barely there. Except the rich stuff. Good thing this family is rich! So each person of the family got 5 things. All together the total  was $1,000,000. As soon as they left the Mall they went home for their rest.10

    Well everyone was in bed, and everyone was fast asleep. It was weird because Selby had a dream that she had died and came alive again then died then faded. So she woke up at like 6:00 in the morning and got some coffee. Just then she realized that her sister and her will be 18 next month.11

          The next morning the twins went to the dance studio. Louise was there too. Finally they got to talk to her. So they talked about Sierra. Louise agreed also. So then she was with the high school kids.12

    She was even better then them!!! So her mom talked to the twins. They all thought about her joining the All Stars Cheer-leading Group. So she ordered the costume and she went to their first competition. It was the competing group. 13

         They cheered and won 1st place! All because of Sierra too. So they went to the Championship. They had won 1st place again! Only there was a problem. A girl broke her leg so they were 1 person short. Okay, but they will try their best to do their cheer for Nationals. It was okay, but they got 2nd place. They went to they very last competition. They finally got that other girl. So they won GOLD!!! 14

      The cheerleaders were so proud of winning. They also cheered on for Sierra. Her mom was so proud and she was sent to a higher leveled group.15

        Shirley was so upset to see Marilyn’s 5th birthday come up. She had started Pre-K. Shelby and Selby were 22 years old. They had gotten married and had children of their own. So that was the end of the Story “ Well, Open the Treasure and See.”16

        The End17

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  • February 17, 2006
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    Jacinda good work on your story love your work