Eighteen Candles (pt 29)

Friday Morning1

mom rouse me from2

sleep3

groaning4

twisting5

sheets choking my body.6

eyes glance at the digital clock7

7:168

-The sun's not even up yet- I yawn9

yanking the covers over my head.10

-Someone's waiting for you11

in the living room- says mom12

peeling the covers off.13

cold air slaps14

my bare legs and arms15

and I reach for the covers again16

but mom has17

snatched them off the bed.18

-Up, up, up!!! It's rude to keep19

guest waiting-20

she exits21

leaving me on the mattress22

hugging my knees to warm up.23

muffled voices24

in the living room25

feet puddering across26

the floor27

I haul myself up28

limply walking 29

bumping into a wall30

flinging my hands in the dark31

for a switch32

I am very tired.33

my eyes haven't fully opened34

I will not pretend to wonder35

who my visitor is.36

I know. It's about time he showed.37

'Hey,' says Zale flatly38

i sputter  foreign greetings aka sleep talk39

before I manage a clear40

'Hi.'41

collapsing into the couch across42

from him43

I curl into a ball44

He says nothing else for five minutes45

eyelids closing46

then I'm jerked awake by47

the sound of his voice48

and I'm thankful we're talking 49

in the dark so that we cannot see50

the other's face51

just listen52

coughing, 'So, um, how have you been?'53

'Okay, tired.' I respond feebly.54

shifting positions in the chair.55

Zale nods, chuckling sheepishly.56

'Sorry for waking you up.'57

yawning, 'It's okay.'  58

Nu uh59

Nu uh60

my arms just fell asleep.61

I want to go back to bed.62

silence hangs himself63

so we can watch him swing64

back65

and66

forth 67

I don't know what68

to say and I'm too tired69

to think of anything70

faint background noises 71

let me know72

mom is washing clothes73

talking on the phone74

Zale sits back75

looks over his shoulder76

sighs77

I try my hardest 78

not to drift away79

'I'm sorry.' He blurts80

sighing, I reach over81

and squeeze his knee.82

'No. I am. I'm sorry.'83

I don't want him apologizing.84

For anything.85

But once again I'd like86

to point out that I am too87

too88

too89

too90

tired to do this now91

so I decide this:92

'Look let's talk when I'm awake okay?'93

'Okay. Okay.'94

back under95

the sheets96

I try to convince myself97

that this was all a dream.98

Author notes

hmmmm....well Zale's back. jump for joy. and cross your fingers

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  • Toxic Paradox
    February 21, 2006
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    Wahey!! I go away for three days, come back to find not one, not two, but THREE Eighteen Candles chapters to read... woohoo... keep it up hun xxx


  • CupidsMeth
    February 17, 2006
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    but you love me still....

    for loverboy. he picked the wrong day to be sick

  • Trial and Error
    February 17, 2006
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    I hate you. . .

    And he's not in class today. He's sick. .


  • CupidsMeth
    February 17, 2006
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    lmao. y'know...sometimes i just forget yer in class!!!!! I'm always home!!!!!

  • Trial and Error
    February 17, 2006
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    Uhm. . . I'm kind of. . y'know. . IN CLASS. . .
    And you aren't going to touch my baby


  • CupidsMeth
    February 17, 2006
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    lmao at you Kat I'm going to shoot Eric if he doesn't call you or something!!!

  • Trial and Error
    February 17, 2006
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    YOU EVIL LITTLE GRRRRRRRRRR If you do not add more today, I'm going to shoot you. . .
    I luff you. .
    I miss Eric


  • CupidsMeth
    February 17, 2006
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    lol!!! I'm going to try to finish the whole story today!! but I am adding more right now for sure!!!


  • BlackBloodyRose
    February 17, 2006
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    lol

    YAY ZaLE!! YAY lol i cna't wiat for more....i mean they rest of the story...that u R addign today no question of it! U HAVE TO!! HAHA or face the rapid munkey who will come eat u!

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