It is so true what they say: Moving on is simple... its what u leave behind that’s so hard. I lerd this and seen this.1
by moving on i have not lost two of my best friends toin and charlotte but we do not see each other as much as we used to. the one thing that i miss is just the fun we used to have. I mean when any one of us were down we would go to each other and do some random stuff to make each other happy again.2
we were always getting in trouble at lunch times expectedly me and charlotte me and toin used to make up for it in lessons.3
me and charlotte we always being told of or in detention we were know as the trouble sum two. pluses we were always covering each others back so teachers did not know who to believe when we were in trouble so this met both of us got punched but hay what are m8ts for. 4
right me and toin were in the same maths class now that was so fun we had it was always us two that would get sent out we would just wined the teacher up till he got so anger well it was funny it used to make maths fun for us two as we both hated the subject in the end i got kicked out of maths so that was our fun up in maths but we mad up for it at lunch or in other lessons 5
I always remember when we all went out ones this other girl came with us called Katie don’t like her any more well I have not scene her for about 4 years so hay any way back to the story we were at the park and me and toin and charlotte jumped the gate but Katie not being the skinny of people got stuck on the gate oh how me toin and charlotte cried with lifter we could not get her out because she was scramming like a piglet that was being castrated. I went over to this man who was sitting with his girl friend and said could u help me m8 she stuck in the gate poor man I bet he still on the medication even now I thought this veins were going to pop out his head!!!!. he got her out as i said before poor man!!6
toin bless her thought she had every new out brake that was out that year I remember it was the year foot and mouth was out brake happened and she came in to school and said to me and charlotte I think I got foot and mouth and we said what makes u say that and she said i got all this white spots in my mouth .now me and charlotte know what there were they we just spots but we tricked her and said oh my god tion you Wright you got it we both had trouble keeping a strata face. but what we did not expected her to do was go to the medical room and say miss I got foot and mouth lol7
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A very good story though I do have one suggestion about this (or maybe two) firstly I think it would help immensely not only you but the reader if you stop using text language like 'M8t' since it is actually fairly easy to spell (that specific word is) without resorting to what I call 'lazy language'. Also Amy darling, I know you have difficulty spelling certain words as I know what that problem is like because I have similar difficulties with maths and my step father can't even spell the word 'shed' so I suggest a sure fire way of good spelling and that is by using either Microsoft word when typing this up and then doing spell and garmmer check or by using the AP spell check which is very good. I ain't being horrible it is just something I think you would benfit from hugely because 'text language' is something that is the shit on everyones shoes
hope you don't mind me pointing those things out doll. But I do love the essense of the story and how it revolved partly around people I actually know
Love you doll
michael
PS: I always use spell check so I'm not perfect if that's what the comment is suggesting....and you know how bad I can be at typing on msn. Just thought it might make you a better writer as well. -
lol man good days man gd days
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hey huni
aw dis is such a cute story
it is very touchin
keep up ur fab poetry i really enjoy reading it
god bless
all my love
sophie
xxxxxx


