He tied her to the bedpost, leering over her like a jackal. She was fully dressed, but he could see her desires bursting through... he would do this one, slow inch at a time... and he had lots of time... it will be many hours before morning breaks... 2
She screamed within, in imagining what was in store for her. It was driving her mad. She was already climaxing in her mind, over and over, and he hadn’t even lowered her blouse’s neckline one inch yet, he just stood there, fulfilling his role as the object of her torrid fantasies racing through her mind...3
He was becoming exhausted just standing there, it took huge amounts of energy not to simply jump on top of her, tear off all her clothes, and ravish her right then and there...4
She was drenched in sweat now, the sweet sweat of love and passion... still he stood erect, bulging ever so larger and firmer, as was she...5
He finally relinquished to his animal impulses and approached her, his heart speeding, he touched her blouse...6
She exploded in a harmonious longing let loose like a violent thunderstorm and arched toward him...7
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His managed to slide his finger under the low neckline of her blouse and lower it an inch... the touch was heavenly, he was trembling, he stepped back, hungrily drinking in the vision of one inch of bared skin... he grabbed onto the doorframe for support...9
She felt violated, but also that the line had been crossed, she was his for the taking, all he had to do was take, she was blacking out with the sheer mindless desire that nature had designed into her...10
He knelt beside her, brushing his lips on her cheek, down her neck, along her soft, quivering shoulders... he was atop her now, not quite touching yet; then he pressed his lips lightly against hers...11
Tears of defeat and victory both raced through her mine, it was all very confusing, but real... she was more than ready, would he love her, or be repulsed? Then she heard it...12
He was panting, no, grunting, like a wild animal! He could not hold himself back for another second, but he managed it... his mind was blazing with the promise of bonding with a female, with her, the one he had his eyes on for so long... then her heard it...13
Keys were jingling at the front door- her parents were home early! They frantically untied her and opened the window. He slipped out, and turned back...14
She was about to grab him and give him a huge kiss, but the parents were at the bedroom door... “Goodbye, my love!” She felt more tortured now than if he had despoiled her... 15
“Hello, sweetie. How is your report coming?”16
“OK, Dad. I was just doing some research...”17
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damn o agree with Dalaney what a tease lol
love the use of the bold words and the two different views on what was happening. Guess research is a lot more fun than I thought
nice job... you should continue for the sake of your characters 
~Betrayals
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tease
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Now now now
See if this were me.. Id be in a lot of trouble with you huh?? But Im innocent and angel like so you need not worry about me.
This is a good story, hope to see what other different things youve got in store
Malzy
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now I'll know where to go for further inspiration... (I saw your page!) thanks for the comment, MixedBabyGurl...
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+Ohh what torture, I wasnt even her and i could feel the frustration!! I hope you continue with this! I would be so mad if I were her! The whole thing was sweet and sensual to the fullest! I hope to read more soon.
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lol thanks my Partner in Death, a high compliment, indeed!
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OMG, you so suck ass!!!!! More, do it longer this time, the parents need to DIE! Ohh Man, I was sooo getting into this. NO FAIR!
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well, a belated thanks for the valuable feedback, erotica! You gave me a few things to think about...!
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thanks much for the comment, Sylvyr, glad you enjoyed my tortured teen dilemma!
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a belated thanks for the comment, Lamia, glad you enjoyed my Bad, Bad Boy!
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OH MY FUCKING GOD........ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!! This i was so good and then you go and do a thing like that, how dare you. I HOPE HOPE HOPE that you are writing more this or a continuation or something! Dammit that was mean. Very good story by the way but that was totally harsh just ending it like that. ugh.
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ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!! Talk about a couple of tormented teens! the poor kids... just wait until they get together for the next "researching" session... Great Story hon.. especially using both views. Congrats and this one deserves an applause!
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haha...that's awesome...great imagery. I love these torturing ones...they're the most desirable.
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thank you much for the comment, Diamond! A sequel... yes, I know what you're thinking, no interruptions!
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oh that was great ... so vivid and sensory, really astounding to read, definately something that draws the reader in ... and the "interruption" ... hehe, classic. i suggest a sequel.
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Yes... the torture! tee-hee...
lol Life is full of it, might as well get immune to it here!
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YOU BASTARD! *drops dead laughing* Get me all interested, then just stop.... How dare you?! 
Cold shower... ANYEH!
~Amy
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