How You Move Me.

Damn it, I just want to affect you. 1

With chills and sighs and shudders from your heart to your spine. Causing shivers to run wild from your fingertips to your head, and back again. Just want to hear whimpers and stutters and you faltering all over your tripped-up tongue when you try to express it.2

But I'd be satisfied if I could infect you - like a virus or a cancer. Filling up your lungs with my breath, your brain with my thoughts, your soul with my touch. Filling up your stunning hazel eyes with acid from my stormy sepia-toned skies.3

Or I'd be happy if I could just infest you like some rampant disease, filtered down through all your protective layers. Tearing down all your internal defenses too, destroying in a single sweep all the antibodies that keep me out.4

But if I can't have that, then I'd want to ravage your brain. Read all your thoughts like a paperback novel. Decode all your words like a language no one speaks anymore. Or just hold all your secrets like little glass marbles, in the palm of my hand. Watch them roll around, then fall, and shatter when they hit the ground.5

I just want to affect you like how ....you affect me.6

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That title isnt very good. Any suggestions appreciated! Thanks.

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  • MonkeyCraze
    February 10, 2006
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    i like this story A LOT it takes talent to write which is something you have. look i have barley any readers for my harriet tubman chapter story! should i quit or keep writing it do you have osme advice?! good luk