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Once there was a Natalie,1

but then she died.   2

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  • Epsilina
    February 13, 2006
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    lol, she does not have to express any feelings. That was just something that steven wrote, and she's telling you

  • strawberrykiss15
    February 11, 2006
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    um... you have to express your feelings more in this. like why you were sad and how sad you were not just thay
    ~Strawberrykiss15~

  • painfully amazing
    February 11, 2006
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    you make it seem like your happy! howd she die. who the hell is natily, whats the backround of your story like thing??????

    love always

    noor lalalolo11 monkey(nickname)

  • MonkeyCraze
    February 10, 2006
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    hehe this is so great it really brought out the good side in me. WOw this is... brilliant... jeez you have some serious talent! Keep writing!