Sweating.Cold. Uneasy. Wind howling outside as i brave this world. Silent emotions course through me as i back away, away from my life outside and into a world internal, nevermore will this fuel me and nevermore will this command.1
Woken by something outside, tapping, clawing its way inside, nails on ice, fingers on razors broken teeth, nails ground into flesh. All forgotten but for this thrusting, monotonous tapping. Throbbing like a weakened heart, pulsing like a godless creation. I cannot cancel it out. It seeps inside me. Rotting my core and leaving me benign. Like a tumor.2
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woah. that is really good, I totally agree with what the others have said. I can relate to it completely aswell. It is very true and really well written. nice one
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This is a very ... touching write
I mean... it hits me.
I am not happy with it touching me, because it makes me feel sad... But that makes clear this write is good.
Lian -
Geez, you are a god of words, your writing is so honest and full of emotion, and you capture such greatness with your words, I love your stuff so much, it's sooo deep and dark...you are awesome, i hope you realize that, you should be proud, this is better than anything I have read in a long time, and it's better than anything I could scribble on a page...it's poetic purity at heart...it's just so Creative, and inspiring, thankyou for sharing it!!!!*HUGZ*
~Terri Anna~
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