Happy new year

3....2....1....Happy New Year, the crowd roared as, sammy threw his hands up in the air, and screamed..."ya fuckin beauty" hahahaha...all around him the streets were filled with mad crazy, drunken people....he looked around, everywhere people were shakin hands and kissing, 1

"got tae get some o this action fir masel" he thought......jus then paula runs up and kisses him full on the lips...2

"happy new yeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaarrrr sammy, gies a kiss ye ugly bastard..." 3

They hugged and spun and spun and hugged......oblivious to everything around them.....4

Sammy felt Paul's arms slide round him, hold him, her kisses became more passionate...her tounge searched his mouth, lips almost sucking him........ 5

"take me home and fuck me...sammy" 6

"Half an hour fur chips...half a fuckin hour for chips in this place" A dreadlocked irish lass, swayed in the door of marcelo's chiipy, south bridge was heavin, 7

"Ah have tae get back tae Paula's" thought sammy, "n through this shite n aw"...8

just at that moment, a punch threw sammy sideways, his head hit the pavement...stunned with the booze and the "wee line a charlie" that he'd taken pre the new year party on princes st, all this plus the cold, made sammys movements slow, sluury..he pulled himself up and used the wall for balance..he looked around to see the culprit...9

"weegie man...whit the fuck...??? 10

Sammy was swayin, he couldnt see to well, he knew if he punched, he probably miss...weeghie, threw him, he hit the wall, his head pounding, he felt a kick at his side....11

"fuck of..." sammy shouted...."fuck of man..." 12

Sammy lost his rag, he grabbed weegie, and pounded his head, over and over of the wall...paula grabbed him...13

"leave it sammy...fuckin leave it...the pigs man..." 14

In the distance he heard the sound of sirens...the crowd in the chippy were now ssurrounded him...he loosened his grip on weegie..his body slumped, blood seeping from his head wound, he lay groaning....the irish girl with the dreadlocks was now cryin hystericaly and screaming at sammy, as the police screamed up at marcelo's. 15

"you..." the police ran from the z car and made a b line for sammy.... 16

Fuuuuuck...paula?? 17

Sammy grabbed Paula and started to run, he was caught on the shoulder by a do gooder in the crowd...sammy kicked back as his foot found the students groin...the student groaned and doubled up....leaving sammy free.... he grabbed onto Paula's hand and scarpered...they ran down niddrie st....laughing and screaming..sammy's herart was pumping, he could feel his head, the cobbles under his feet were slippy, his feet lost thier grip, he crashed to the ground.... 18

"im fucked man..." he thought, the sound of heavy boots on the cobbles, he looked up to see two police runnin down towards him...he used all the strength in his body, and started of down nidrie st. 19

Two drunk students were stummbling toward a taxi as sammy and paula rushed towards the cowgate....20

"taxi paula...c'moan man...." 21

They ran to the taxi, pushing the drunken students... " 22

Oi...fuck of..we were ere first...get yer own fucking taxi..chavs.." 23

The male, a tall weedy long haired type, grabbed apula, as to push her away, paula kneed his crotch, and jumped in. 24

Drive.." Paula screamed25

"Oi..get oot, 26

"shut up n fuckin drive...." screamed paula.. 27

the taxi jolted of and sped of, up the pleasence.. 28

Oxgangs....29

Paula sat back, behind them they could see the two coppers stopping and gettin on the radio...sammy looked back, his heart pounding....he felt like crying, he closed his eyes, he could see the blood, the crowd outside Marcelo's..all he wanted was a bad ay fuckin chips...no a full on fight likes ay. That irish lass, he'd seen her somwhere before, at some hippy party in the woods at this tree protest ootside Dalkeith, he was sure she wasny irish...she had been the DJ's bird, some bloke called Billy or somethin....he opened his eyes, jus as paula kisses hi, she kissed him more passionatley than before, she knew that the taxi would take at least half an hour to get to Oxgangs...she moved up and straddled him, her tights were already in hr pocket, as were her knickers, sammy couldnt believe his luck, his fingers up her thighs, as Paula undid his zip, his cock was hard, to hard sammy thought, the anger and adrenlain had got to him...he laughed as Paula held his cock, she pulled back his foreskin, he opened his thighs and lifted his erse of the seat, and slid into Paula's wet snatch....she leaned back and groaned and started to ride him, this wasnt love, ther was no foreplay...no romance, Paula slammed onto sammys lap, grunting, she held tightly onto his arms and dug her nails in....sammys eyes were like fire, he gave Paula what she wanted, he had never been short, but what with problems, he made up for it, he thought....Pula's strokes became faster and harder, she leaned back to sammy, kissing him , sucking him...30

Sammy, a louv ye man...ride me....uh sammy..urrrg.....aye..urrrg....." 31

Her grip became tighter....sammy's hands wre now on the seat, he fucked for all he was worth..Paula...leaned back so far her hair tangled on the cab floor, her legs wrapped round samms waist, ...ther was silence, sammy looked ahead, through cracked eyes, he saw the drivers eyes lookin back at him, everything seemed to slow down, as if he was flying.....he felt safe, he could see arthurs seat, and the craggs, he was playing...he was three again, with his brother..they were flying a kite, the wind tossed the kite in the air, everything was blisss.......no...no...angus....ma wee angus, the ambulence driver pronounced im dead at the scene...the fall from the crags....the blood everywhere........................... 32

............................. 33

The taxi jolted..suddenly sammy was brought back to life, the taxi was swerving.....Paula was goin radge...screamin...her legs wer breakin sammys waist....she seemed different, more intense, aye...sure he'd shagged her before......at that party at that posh friends ay hers in Craiglochart....in that grand bedroom...now she was.....she ....she.... 34

Aaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrgggggggggg...SAAAAAAMMMMMY. im cumin...arrrrrgggggrrrrr..." 35

He felt her..her fanny twitched, she convulsed as the orgasam screamed through her...........she let out one last scream.....sammy 's cock...spewed cum deep inside Paula's cunt, both were lost one huge orgasam...they didnt notice the taxi swerve...the driver alredy slumped.....sammy and paula's lips were pressed, thier whole physkys were as one.....the taxi lurched onto the pavement...as it rolled up the wall and onto its roof, it span and span....like an auto ballet.....sammy and paula, swam in their cum and thier love....the driver awoke, jus to see the wagon, smash through the cab.... 36

They found all three, in the taxi..the driver dead, paula ans sammy still entwined....on the stereo, that track played...ye kno that one....... 37

Romeo must die................... 38

Author notes

This peice is written in scottish slang...any questions you have, i will be happy to help,though it is all pretty self expalined.

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  • Cyber Tales
    February 9, 2006
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    Its confusion, is its essence, the fight scene, was a forgotten rivalry. The taxi scene, was the perfect ending, {i thought}..it means the lovers never part...even in death.

    Ghost

  • my-masquerade
    February 6, 2006
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    wow the language was intense, but I think i followed in terms of that. I'm confused about what happened though. He got in a fight why? cause the guy was drunk? and why did the taxi crash? I dunno I was confused but I was hooked tryin to figure it all out.

  • Cyber Tales
    February 6, 2006
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    Thank you xAprilx, it has been likened to Irvine Welsh's writing. I like the ending also...

    Ghost


  • xAprilx
    February 4, 2006
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    very good!

    interesting... kept me reading!
    it was good!
    i was very surprised by the ending!
    i like that!
    ...:ape:...