It began to rain and in the distance lighting struck but Emilie took no notice to either. the only thing on her mind at the moment was her father.He would be pissed when he noticed she was gone, she didnt care though. she had to get as far away from him as she could. she had seen her chance to escape the prision that was now her home so she took it. Emilie couldnt stay another night, not unless she wanted a black eye for the next morning. It was very tiresome geting beaten every night, then having to his the consequences of her actions. It was her fault that he had to beat her, he would tell her and for 5 years she believed him. The abuse seemed to start right around the time, her mother left them. She had said she had an emergancy at the hospital, so she needed to go back to work yet that night she didnt come home and after a week Emilie knew her mother would never come home. thinking that it was her fault her mother had abandended her, she felt that it was also her fault her father beat her. yet tonight something hit, she didnt know what it was, all she knew was that she needed to leave and never go back. that was exactly her plan. Emilie had nothing with her except a wad of twenties in her back pocket, she hoped it would be enough money for a nights stay in a near by motel. She could tell she was close to the main road now. It was so dark out and living in the woods you normaly dont have street lights. she was finally out on the main road, all she would have to do is make about 3 miles before she could get to the local motel. it was so quite, yet somewhere she could hear the sound of a roaring car. it was coming closer. maybe she beg for a ride ( though she normally wouldnt ask someone she didnt know). She turned to see if she could see the car and that was the last thing she saw.1
Author notes
this should go under abuse but on this screen there isnt a category, so for right now its under other. i story is sorta based on true events, mainly the abuse but every thing else is fictional.
this is also my first story, so go easy on me
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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wow..this was..wow..it was really great...you are very talented and i do hope you keep writing
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thank you
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WOW THAT WAS AMAZING. I LOVED IT
YOU HVAE TALENT . I LOVED THAT WAY YOU SPELLED EMILIE .
UMM ONE QUESTION THO WAS IT HER DAD THAT KILLED HER?
WELL GOOD JOB
BEYE
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very nice i liked it alot. you kept pullin me in and in and then it happened. very nice.


