i have never felt so strongly for another person in my whole life. being in his arms made me want to never let go again. before i knew it we were flying. the ground had been lifted from our feet. i got scared and almost let go. i never want to be pushed into things. i'm not good at confessing my secerts and then letting myself crawl into someone. he made me so real. like the wings on my back weren't just part of some dream that i thought i was having. there was warmth between us as we rose. we were so high now that we were hitting the clouds. every slowly i put out my hand and felt the essance of wonder. feeling this wonderful cloud of wonder made me wonder if i would be with hayden forever. or if he would be just a dream. i doubt myself often and never believe in what i am seeing. i have never been loved before and i never thought the person i feel in love with would love me back. i never thought i would be able to touch a cloud besides in my dreams of one day flying. the clouds were soon breaking all around and we were lifted on to a cloud near by. it had a sign. i glance around not noticeing the sign at first. 'welcome to cirsume' is what is read.....1
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Amazing
Aubrie, this is truley amazing. I mean that you. You really have a nack for sotry writing. I seriously think that you should continue to write this story and then revise it and then seriously think about having someone like a story publisher think about publishing it.
Claire <3beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 3, overall: 9, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 4.
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