Like a Lion - 4

Nothing really happened after Anaka came until the pack of bandits raided our lot at night about a week after we set out east with him.  I dunno' if it was Anaka's fault they came after us, but nothin' like that ever happened before he joined us, that's for sure.  Anyway, Novu woke me up mid-attack.  It was kinda scary, bein' woke up in the middle of the night to a terrified friend shaking my shoulders amidst gunshots and hoarse screams.  I got up real quick and grabbed my knapsack, scurrying over behind a worn hide flapping in the desert's night wind (which, in case you didn't know, is pretty damn strong).1

And then I said to Novu, "The writer of this story pretty much sucks."  He agreed with me, of course, seeing as despite how much she loves post-apocalyptic stories, she can't write them to save her life.  And then they all died.  Being shot out of a cannon into a flaming tree shredder.  The end.2

Author notes

Okay, yeah, so I can't write stories, it was proven once with Immortal Exile and again with Like a Lion... shuddup, lol, I'll do what I want.

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