Synopsis1
The billion Dollar Kid2
Four Fool hardy robbers steal a billion dollar diamond. It is very tiny very bright and very shiny.3
As they run from the Shopping Mall where the stone has been on display, they drop the stone which is picked up and swallowed by a small child.4
The robbers are horrified and decide to quickly unmask and appear to be normal shoppers.5
They follow the mother and child home knowing full well that 6
the child will eventually deposit the stone in his nappy.7
They hang around the garbage bin waiting for the dirty nappies to appear. Then have to go through them looking for the stone, each trying to make the other do the dirty deed.8
They search many soiled diapers with much disgust but realise that the Mother beat them to it and has found the stone first.9
All hell breaks loose when they give chase as the Mother takes the stone to the jewellers. 10
Street races involve much comic action as the mother tries to flee her pursuers.11
Eventually after much stalking and attepts to reclaim the stone, the thieves are caught and put behind bars.12
Author notes
Option One
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Wait.. what the heck? Why is such a small diamond worth so much anyway? Bah. Whatever.
Sounds like someone would make a sketch out of ths on robot chicken. Since it's for a contest I guess it's expected to be odd -
Screen play is what I see. I story to see with more twists and unexpected turns. Great idea
I see the great potential that can be shaped by a greatly gifted writer , you have all that is needed to make this a very interesting story. I think of the Marx Brother movies ( I am hoping you may find them in some very old reels) they did a lot of slap stick comedy that had many deeper levels that could be an interesting view with your story outline. I hope that you find this story a work that you continue I will try and find you again. Annie
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 3.
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Expensive Scat.
Like the goose that laid the golden egg, this child layed a diamond. Story of greed all around. Did she get a babysitter or have the baby in the car seat during this hectic chase and endanger the child's life?beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 6, ending: 4, characters: 5.
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Have you by any chance seen the movie Snatch? It involves a similar plot element...only with a dog. It also takes place in the UK, has man-eating pigs, very incompetent thieves, and Irish gypsies. Completely random...and I love it
Anyways, congrats on the bronze...do you plan on writing it now? hehe
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hahahaha! eeeeew, Jan I read this b4 brekkie- don't know if I feel like it now- Just glad I don't have any babies, or I would be checking thier nappies for diamonds!
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