Dylan and Denise were on their way to the park. It was where they had their first date and shared their first kiss. Denise was quiet the whole time but looked lovingly at Dylan. She was so glad that things with them were better and back together. 1
Dylan parked the car and they walked around hand in hand. Denise however flipped out when a pretty girl walked by and touched Dylan on the arm. "Bunny, you better leave my man alone," she shrieked. The girl looked like she was about ready to cry but hollered, "Shut up you pyscho!" Dylan sat down on the park bench and put his head in his hands. "What's wrong," Denise asked. Dylan paused then said, "I think you need help."2
Denise started to run. She ran up the road. Dylan hurriedly started up the car and then floored it to follow her. However, he didn't see the blue car coming at him or the stoplight.....3
CRASH!4
The crowd gathered around as the police and ambulance showed up. Dylan was awake but hurting. He kept calling for Denise, yet no one knew where she was.5
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Wohhh yea a little twisted but hey its all good. Sometimes it makes a good twist. sorry if i'm not getting the story up that fast but i've got a lot going on in my mind so...just keep bearing with me
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OMG!!! NNOOO HE CANT DIE!! Where is she!?! OOO maybe he should die and then she doesnt find out until after, but then she feels really guilty and kills herself ... yea im twisted... but i like this chapter
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