I remember Before. Most of the memories have been deleted, but I alone remember. I alone escaped. We all knew that there was some kind of plot, but we had never expected anything so...heartless. Many people died in the struggle. Of the humans who live, they will never feel love or hate, anger or sadness, hope or excitement again. I am constantly on the run, for they are constantly searching for "Rebels." Those who are disobedient are executed, which seems to me to be a kindness compared to the others. And yet, I still treasure my life, so I will stay on the run. Not long ago, there was a band of Rebels. We worked together to get food and find an abandoned house to squat in. All but I have been caught, and I watched from afar as they begged for their lives and were mercilessly executed by friends and family of Before.1
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Short but sweet. But there shall be more!
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i cant wait for more! theres a lot of different directions you could go with this. great, great.
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yea sweet... but anyway, it was good, indeed twas short. and its funny how words can be thrown around. first its mercy, and then its merciless, but i know what you mean. sort of reminds me of shades children. i read too much =/.
cant wait for more!
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very intriguing start, you definitely make me want to read more. post more soon, this has a lot of potential!
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