Betrayal ch 6

Dylan spotted Denise and a smile came to his face. He really hoped that things would finally work out between them. He'd give up everything for her. He couldn't believe that it had taken him the break up to figure it out. 1

Denise sighed and walked over to Dylan. She was unsure of what to say. But she knew that she had feelings for Dylan and yet she was still confused whether or not she was ready for a relationship.2

"Soooo," was all Denise was able to say. Dylan kissed her and they both felt the sparks. After a minute, Dylan looked at Denise and said, "I miss you." Denise was now speechless. Her heart was pounding out of her chest, but yet she still managed to say, "I miss you too. I love you."3

Dylan smiled and wrapped her in a tight hug and then said, "Let's go."4

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sorry so short but yea i cant seem to get an idea of where to take the story now. opinions are welcome

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  • beautifulbrat
    January 28, 2006
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    aight i'mma post the next chapter. i've gotten a few ideas right now

  • beautifulbrat
    January 28, 2006
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    lol Nathan! umm that would make a good story for you to write. hmmm wait....that gives me a bit of an idea. thanks
    Edited on Jan 28, 3:48 p.m. because 'idea!'.

  • beautifulbrat
    January 27, 2006
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    lol it wasnt my longest chapter but like i said i'm trying to come up with more just be patient with me

  • xXxSilentCryxXx
    January 27, 2006
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    lol that would be really good idea... this part was so cute!!

  • beautifulbrat
    January 27, 2006
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    lol that gives me an idea for Denise....


  • BlackBloodyRose
    January 27, 2006
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    lol

    lol ur phsyco but that would be fun to read! lol u sould rigt that!!!!!!

  • Spork the Mighty
    January 26, 2006
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    They all die in a car wreck except the guy with my name and he gets the hot chick and they live happily ever after, till he finds out she has a twin sister that has secretly tied up his girlfriend and hid her in the basement and he's been kissing the wrong girl! *gasp*

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