TRIUMPHAL ENTRY1
Miracles come in many different forms. Sometimes they come to us spiritually, sometimes they come to us through people, but sometimes the best miracles come in the forms of animals. 2
In this story, the miracle comes in the form of a horse. He was put on this earth for a very short time, but that time was precious. In what little time he had, he did more than what most people do in a lifetime. He was a pet, he was a hero, he was a friend.3
This is the story of Judah.4
I got the disease at an early age. For as long as I can remember I’ve had it and I probably always will. This horrible disease is known as Horse Fever. It starts to take you over, little by little, until it grows into something so big it can’t be contained. As soon as I learned how to talk I started asking for a horse. When I got a little older my parents found ways to let me ride some, but it was never enough. I always wanted more. Model horses were okay for a while, but even they didn’t satisfy me. The fever grew worse and worse until finally in 8th grade my dad gave in and let me have horseback riding lessons every week. It was great. I was riding everyday and eventually I started showing. But you see, Horse Fever doesn’t ever really stop and it only gets worse if you don‘t have your own horse. My dad finally realized this and, being the loving dad that he is, he started looking for a horse to buy me. 5
One day, while at a horse show, my dad met a lady named Janice. He instantly liked her and liked her even more when she told him about a horse she had for sale. He told me this and of course I got very excited, so he scheduled a time for us to go have a look at her horse in Daytona. I anxiously waited for that day, but finally it did come and we were off. 6
We met Janice at her barn and she led us to the stall that kept the horse. I still remember my heart pounding as I peered over the stall door to get the first glimpse of this animal. His name was Judah and he was magnificent. A 16hh thoroughbred with a gleaming bay coat and 2 white socks stood there with his sweet eyes just gazing into mine. He walked over to the stall door and put his head over and nudged me. At that moment, I fell in love for the first time. I can’t explain how, but I knew that he and I were meant to be together. 7
A few minutes later I had him tacked up and ready to go. I rode him around the ring for a bit and jumped him over a few jumps. He was great. He was only 6 so he still needed some work, but I didn’t care. I loved him and I knew he was perfect for me. After riding and un-tacking him I grazed him for a while. In that short period of time we formed a connection. I talked and he listened intently as he softly chewed on the wet grass. I told him of all we would do and how much fun we would have together if he was mine. He listened as I prayed that God would let me have him. I prayed until it was time to go. I said goodbye to Judah and whispered to him that I would see him again soon. 8
Janice took us to lunch that day and she and I talked a lot about a lot of different things. When were alone she talked to me about God and Judah and how things would all work out according to Gods plan. This made me feel a lot better about getting Judah. I was convinced that God had heard my prayer that day and that He fully intended on carrying it out. 9
A few weeks went by and still, nothing. We went back again to see Judah and the connection was even stronger the second time. I was head over heels for him. Then one day, a few weeks before my birthday, my dad picked me up from school and told me that he was taking me back down to Daytona to try out Judah again. I was excited, but a little sad too. I didn’t understand why he kept torturing me with going to see Judah when I couldn’t have him. My grandmother was with us so it was a fun ride down there. 10
As soon as we got to the barn I jumped out of the car and ran to see Judah. As I rounded the corner I saw Judah’s stall. It was covered in Happy Birthday paper and balloons. I looked around and there was a bunch of people I didn’t know just standing there smiling at me. Once I realized what was going on I still just stood there in shock. I couldn’t even say anything. I was overcome with happiness. Judah was MINE! I hugged my dad and blew out the candles on my cake. I don’t think I have ever been that happy in my entire life. I went over to Judah’s stall and went in and hugged his neck. It was all I could do not to cry. 11
After I fed Judah cake I rode him. The feeling of riding you own horse for the first time is unexplainable. It’s one of the best feelings in this world and I rode around with a huge smile on my face the whole time. That day had to come to an end, but I never will forget it for as long as I live. A few days later I waited anxiously at my barn for the trailer to come with Judah on it. As it came down the long drive I stood there thinking of everything that had happened and everything that would happen with my new best friend. 12
The first few months with Judah were the happiest of my life. We became best friends. After school everyday I would take care of him and ride him and later play games with him. We went to shows and even went to a show in North Carolina. We had a blast and Judah and I became very close. I would tell him everything. He knew all of my secrets and kept every one of them. He was a great listener. When I was upset I would go into his stall, sit down and cry. He would come over to me and put his head in my lap and let me cry until I felt better. He understood me better than anyone and I understood him. Looking into his deep brown eyes always could make me feel like everything would be ok. It was almost like he was sent to earth just to take care of me. I, to this day, will never know what would have become of me without him. 13
Then one day Judah became lame. At first we thought it was only White Line disease, which was serious enough, but then we discovered that he had been previously lame. He had foundered and had Laminitis. I was at the barn everyday for hours just taking care of him. I’ll never forget the first time we took him to The University of Florida Veterinary School. When we got there he was put in a stall where I stayed with him the whole time. Just talking to him and telling him that everything would be ok. Once they drugged him and had a look at him they told us that things didn’t look to great but we still had hope if we wanted to work with him more. Of course we decided we would. My dad loved Judah almost as much as I did. So we took him home and eventually we kept him at my dads friends' barn and then finally at my dad's barn. 14
After a few months Judah started to loose a lot of weight. We took him back to Gainesville and there they told us that he was in too much pain to live and we should put him down. I was heart broken. He was my best friend and I couldn’t imagine never seeing him again. They said to leave him there over night and to come and say goodbye to him within the next few days. Before we left, Judah’s Vet took my dad and me aside and told us that when they put Judah down they were going to take the cornea’s from his eyes and give them to another horse so that through Judah’s death another horse would be able to live. It comforted me to know that even though Judah would be gone he would still be a hero through the eyes of another horse.15
Then the day came when we had to go and say goodbye. That day my heart broke into a million pieces and it was the most painful thing I have ever experienced. I stayed in the pasture with my horse alone for an hour or so. I told him how sorry I was and I thanked him for being the best friend I have ever had. I told him how much he meant to me and how I would never forget him as long as lived. I reminded him of all the fun we had together playing tag and hid-n-go seek. I told him how much I loved him and how I always would. He listened to everything I said and I know he understood every word of it. For the last time he listened to me pray just like I did that day I met him. He listened to me ask God for a second chance with him and he listened when I begged God for forgiveness for whatever I had done to make him be taken away from me. He listened as I poured my heart out looking for any sign that everything would all be ok. Judah just listened, just like he always had. Finally, I said goodbye. Through many tears my dad and I walked away from him knowing it was the last time we would see him. 16
Judah’s show name was Triumphal Entry. He entered my life with triumph and exited his life with triumph as well. In his coming he saved me and in his going he saved a another horse’s life. I believe Judah was much more than a horse. I believe that he was sent here to make many different miracles happen, no matter how big or how small. Judah came into this world as a horse, but in my heart, I know he left as an Angel. 17
Miracles come in many different forms. Sometimes they come to us spiritually, sometimes they come to us through people, but sometimes the best miracles come in the forms of animals. 2
In this story, the miracle comes in the form of a horse. He was put on this earth for a very short time, but that time was precious. In what little time he had, he did more than what most people do in a lifetime. He was a pet, he was a hero, he was a friend.3
This is the story of Judah.4
I got the disease at an early age. For as long as I can remember I’ve had it and I probably always will. This horrible disease is known as Horse Fever. It starts to take you over, little by little, until it grows into something so big it can’t be contained. As soon as I learned how to talk I started asking for a horse. When I got a little older my parents found ways to let me ride some, but it was never enough. I always wanted more. Model horses were okay for a while, but even they didn’t satisfy me. The fever grew worse and worse until finally in 8th grade my dad gave in and let me have horseback riding lessons every week. It was great. I was riding everyday and eventually I started showing. But you see, Horse Fever doesn’t ever really stop and it only gets worse if you don‘t have your own horse. My dad finally realized this and, being the loving dad that he is, he started looking for a horse to buy me. 5
One day, while at a horse show, my dad met a lady named Janice. He instantly liked her and liked her even more when she told him about a horse she had for sale. He told me this and of course I got very excited, so he scheduled a time for us to go have a look at her horse in Daytona. I anxiously waited for that day, but finally it did come and we were off. 6
We met Janice at her barn and she led us to the stall that kept the horse. I still remember my heart pounding as I peered over the stall door to get the first glimpse of this animal. His name was Judah and he was magnificent. A 16hh thoroughbred with a gleaming bay coat and 2 white socks stood there with his sweet eyes just gazing into mine. He walked over to the stall door and put his head over and nudged me. At that moment, I fell in love for the first time. I can’t explain how, but I knew that he and I were meant to be together. 7
A few minutes later I had him tacked up and ready to go. I rode him around the ring for a bit and jumped him over a few jumps. He was great. He was only 6 so he still needed some work, but I didn’t care. I loved him and I knew he was perfect for me. After riding and un-tacking him I grazed him for a while. In that short period of time we formed a connection. I talked and he listened intently as he softly chewed on the wet grass. I told him of all we would do and how much fun we would have together if he was mine. He listened as I prayed that God would let me have him. I prayed until it was time to go. I said goodbye to Judah and whispered to him that I would see him again soon. 8
Janice took us to lunch that day and she and I talked a lot about a lot of different things. When were alone she talked to me about God and Judah and how things would all work out according to Gods plan. This made me feel a lot better about getting Judah. I was convinced that God had heard my prayer that day and that He fully intended on carrying it out. 9
A few weeks went by and still, nothing. We went back again to see Judah and the connection was even stronger the second time. I was head over heels for him. Then one day, a few weeks before my birthday, my dad picked me up from school and told me that he was taking me back down to Daytona to try out Judah again. I was excited, but a little sad too. I didn’t understand why he kept torturing me with going to see Judah when I couldn’t have him. My grandmother was with us so it was a fun ride down there. 10
As soon as we got to the barn I jumped out of the car and ran to see Judah. As I rounded the corner I saw Judah’s stall. It was covered in Happy Birthday paper and balloons. I looked around and there was a bunch of people I didn’t know just standing there smiling at me. Once I realized what was going on I still just stood there in shock. I couldn’t even say anything. I was overcome with happiness. Judah was MINE! I hugged my dad and blew out the candles on my cake. I don’t think I have ever been that happy in my entire life. I went over to Judah’s stall and went in and hugged his neck. It was all I could do not to cry. 11
After I fed Judah cake I rode him. The feeling of riding you own horse for the first time is unexplainable. It’s one of the best feelings in this world and I rode around with a huge smile on my face the whole time. That day had to come to an end, but I never will forget it for as long as I live. A few days later I waited anxiously at my barn for the trailer to come with Judah on it. As it came down the long drive I stood there thinking of everything that had happened and everything that would happen with my new best friend. 12
The first few months with Judah were the happiest of my life. We became best friends. After school everyday I would take care of him and ride him and later play games with him. We went to shows and even went to a show in North Carolina. We had a blast and Judah and I became very close. I would tell him everything. He knew all of my secrets and kept every one of them. He was a great listener. When I was upset I would go into his stall, sit down and cry. He would come over to me and put his head in my lap and let me cry until I felt better. He understood me better than anyone and I understood him. Looking into his deep brown eyes always could make me feel like everything would be ok. It was almost like he was sent to earth just to take care of me. I, to this day, will never know what would have become of me without him. 13
Then one day Judah became lame. At first we thought it was only White Line disease, which was serious enough, but then we discovered that he had been previously lame. He had foundered and had Laminitis. I was at the barn everyday for hours just taking care of him. I’ll never forget the first time we took him to The University of Florida Veterinary School. When we got there he was put in a stall where I stayed with him the whole time. Just talking to him and telling him that everything would be ok. Once they drugged him and had a look at him they told us that things didn’t look to great but we still had hope if we wanted to work with him more. Of course we decided we would. My dad loved Judah almost as much as I did. So we took him home and eventually we kept him at my dads friends' barn and then finally at my dad's barn. 14
After a few months Judah started to loose a lot of weight. We took him back to Gainesville and there they told us that he was in too much pain to live and we should put him down. I was heart broken. He was my best friend and I couldn’t imagine never seeing him again. They said to leave him there over night and to come and say goodbye to him within the next few days. Before we left, Judah’s Vet took my dad and me aside and told us that when they put Judah down they were going to take the cornea’s from his eyes and give them to another horse so that through Judah’s death another horse would be able to live. It comforted me to know that even though Judah would be gone he would still be a hero through the eyes of another horse.15
Then the day came when we had to go and say goodbye. That day my heart broke into a million pieces and it was the most painful thing I have ever experienced. I stayed in the pasture with my horse alone for an hour or so. I told him how sorry I was and I thanked him for being the best friend I have ever had. I told him how much he meant to me and how I would never forget him as long as lived. I reminded him of all the fun we had together playing tag and hid-n-go seek. I told him how much I loved him and how I always would. He listened to everything I said and I know he understood every word of it. For the last time he listened to me pray just like I did that day I met him. He listened to me ask God for a second chance with him and he listened when I begged God for forgiveness for whatever I had done to make him be taken away from me. He listened as I poured my heart out looking for any sign that everything would all be ok. Judah just listened, just like he always had. Finally, I said goodbye. Through many tears my dad and I walked away from him knowing it was the last time we would see him. 16
Judah’s show name was Triumphal Entry. He entered my life with triumph and exited his life with triumph as well. In his coming he saved me and in his going he saved a another horse’s life. I believe Judah was much more than a horse. I believe that he was sent here to make many different miracles happen, no matter how big or how small. Judah came into this world as a horse, but in my heart, I know he left as an Angel. 17
Author notes
Ok... this is a true story about my horse and me..... Thanks for taking the time to read it!
What did you think? Please comment!
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Tears, but how is it that I'm smiling? This story is the most amazing miricle I've read about the relationship between a horse and his owner. I came upon my own horse by accident, and nearly crashing my sisters truck into a boulder. I was mad at my dad because he tried to teach me to drive. I started crying, and he did the first thing that could put a smile on my face. He took me to the closest horse he could find. There, while he marveled at a new born shetland colt, I gazed at a deathly thin black mare and her perfect little foal (although she wasn't far from being a full grown horse). With my luck, I noticed a wooden sign that said Horses For Sale: Name Your Price. I wasn't willing to get one of those horses, let alone the skeloton of a horse with the ugliest coat possible. Then my eyes met both mother and foals eyes. I didn't see the sickly eyes of an old run down mare in those sandstrom eyes, I saw a young mare in pain. The night tormented me with the memory of a dusty bay coat and bones popping out of nearly every visible part of the mares body. The next day, I made up an excuse for my dad to buy her for me. "You never got me my 13th birthday present dad." and he smiled at my cleverness. The only way I was allowed a horse by my mother was if I sneaked it into my life. And I did just that. Now the filthy bay mare that was wounded by tormenting owners (mentally, emotionally and physically) is the most wanted creature in Arizona and Mexico. Her coat a shining black in the shadows and a drop dead blue in the beams of the sun, the perfection of her posture and the wonder of her flowing mane and tail were the envey of the block. But what makes her so spectacular to me, is not the sleekness of her coat, but the bond she and I have. I am the mother mare for her, and she is my foal. I protect her, comfort her, feed her, love her and ensure she is happy. She is my miricle, and God made me special for her. My dad and I are looking for a stallion to breed with her, and I can't think of a desent name, but I'm sure when my Beautiful hears the story of Judah, she will argree with me.
Sorry for the long comment, but I have one last thing to say. Your stories amazing, and my story of my mare, Belle, will never reach the love that has been formed between you and Judah.
Best wishes and hopes,
Alvamear

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THE POWER OF LOVE, WOW!
I have truly enjoyed this journey you've taken me on, and how I can appreciate your thoughts on this very special angelic horse. You captivate the very essense of his being, and see through heavenly eyes...I thought this to be very inspiring! No doubt this will go down in the spirits history of one of the best angels of all times in your world, and the readers. Thanks for sharing this very uplifting piece sweet soul.
blessings~
-Timothy *Rose*beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 10, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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i clicked on this off the shameless box but don't have time to read this whole thing, but i will be back later. wow it is 12:30 in the morning. damn. sorry, i will be back.
serena -
you are really awesome! Thank you so very much for your kind words. They mean SOOO much to me!! You almost made me cry! Thank you so much for reading my story and everything! You really are a great person and I love the fact that you commented on my story and actually liked it! you really don't know how much it means to me! I know i already said that, but I can't say it enough! Thank you! He was my best friend (as weird as that seems to some people) and it's just really nice to write somthing about him and then get recognition for it, so thank you.
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Wow... what can I say? I don't even know where to begin. Well, I like the introduction you gave to the story. It really made me want to read the entire thing. At first I thought horse fever was something where you were allergic to horses
Then I realized it was something like where you crave to be with them or however you want to put it.
Glad I got that cleared up towards the beginning. The story has a nice use of description and builds up very nicely... even and everything. Really brought me in and made me want to keep reading. Also, I could feel the excitement of the story when you described getting him for your birthday and everything. That was pretty awesome
Then the ending made me really sad, but it made me glad I read the story. It's always hard to loose a friend... I know that.
Thanks for having me read this! Let me know if you write another story in the future!
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haha I didn't either... My friend Jack always has somthing bad to say about whatever I write.... that's all....
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i didn't notice any skipped words then when i read it
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Thank you so much! Your kind words and all your help means the world to me! you are awesome!
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it is a really great story
you have written it well
nice to see so much strength and compassion with the donating the cornea’s from his eye.
dads friends barn and then finally at my dads barn
dads friends' barn and then finally at my dad's barn )i think with that lol it's a tricky one)
hid-n-go seek - hide-n-go seek
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i liked it, it really does bring hope.
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touching ...i see u typed this rather fast as u skiped a few words i noticed as do i when i type fast great story quite touching like i said before
jack
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I think it is enough like a story to be considered a story and I feel it is a good one. I knew the way you set it up in the beginning that Judah was going to die and I really didn't want to read about it. I don't like those kind of things with animals. I like happy endings. A tough decision in the contest.
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Good story. It's written more like a journal entry than a story, but a good story, heartfelt if I was one to give in to that. Thanks for entering my contest.
-EA
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