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The music blared, too loud for her to think clearly.  Or maybe that was the beer kicking in, who knew for certain.  The party was raving, alchohol, music, dancing, it was all happening at Jerrys house that night.  So why couldnt she find him?1

"AMY!" Amy didnt seem to hear her as she was dancing with Rick. "AMY!" she tried again.2

"WHAT!" She yelled back as Rick started kissing her neck.3

"HAVE YOU SEEN JERRY?"4

"NO!" Where was he!  She had to come to the party just to see him and he was nowhere to be found.  'He better not be drunk in bed again.' she thought.  She started checking the bedrooms, they were probably her best bet.5

"Oh, sorry." she muttered as she wallked in on a couple.  She started to walk to the room when she thought of something.  She went back to the room.  "JERRY!" She screamed.  He looked up at her and his eyes went big.  She had caught him, again.  She ran back downstairs, intent on leaving the party.6

"HANNAH WAIT!" Not this time, she wasnt waiting for him this time.  She got downstairs but thats about it.  There were too many people, dancing, drinking smoking....she couldnt even find the door.7

"Hey babe wanna *hiccup* dance?" 8

"Get off me Adam." she said as she pushed him off.9

"Come on!" He grabbed her waist.10

"Adam! Your drunk! Get off me!" She pushed him away again and walked farther into the throng of people.  She looked behind her to see if Jerry had even followed her, of course he hadnt.  She look around, searching to the drinks.  There, she saw them.  She walked over and tripped over someone passed out on the floor,  he would be in a bathroom soon.  11

"Hey!"12

"Hey Rob, give me something good."13

"You got it!" He handed her something, she didnt know what, she didnt care.14

"Thanks." She said as she walked away.  She took a swig, good stuff whatever it was.15

"Hey sexy!" She turned at the familiar voice.16

"Hey David." she replied with a smile.  She hadnt seen her ex in a while, it felt good.17

"What have you been up to?" he asked as he put one arm on the wall behind her, she loved that pose.18

"Not too much.  How about yourself?" She shouldnt be thinking about David, her boyfriend was upstairs with another girl.  She need to leave.19

"Oh the same stuff as usual." He answered, she noticed him look her over, memorizing her in his mind. "Wanna dance?"20

"Um," she shouldnt, but oh how she wanted to. "Sure." His smile was painfully familiar as he took her hand and led her to the 'dance floor.'  They danced to 50 Cent, his hands on her waist, her hips swinging.  Her hands on his chest, his lips on her neck.  What was she doing?  She and David were over, she needed to go home.  She pulled back.21

"David.."22

"What?" he was hurt, she could see it in his eyes.  Why?  They were over.23

"I need to go home."24

"Let me take you." 25

"No..I-"26

"Why not?  Oh, your boyfriend here somewhere?"27

"Kind of-"  Amy walked by then, bad timing.28

"HEY I FOUND JERRY!" She yelled over the music, "He's upstairs with that new girl.  Hey you ok?"  She didnt have time to respond, Rick grabbed her waist and they started making out again.29

"Your with Jerry again?  Hannah what are you doing!"30

"I dont need a lecture from you David!" Stupid tears, dont start now.  She couldnt stop them as hhe yelled at David.  "We broke up!  You dont have power over who I date!" She started sobbing as she ran, looking for the door.31

"HANNAH!" David was right behind her, grabbing her wrist.  "Dont do this Hannah!  Jerry doesnt deserve you!"  Why did he have to be so right?32

"I know!  God I know!  But I cant leave him!  I CANT!" She fell to the floor, sobbing.  Why was she with Jerry anyways?  And why did David have to be so perfect it hurt?33

"Come on, Im taking you home Hannah." Davids strong arms, lifting her off the floor.  Darkness.34

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~35

She woke to the sound of her alarm clock, loud and annoying.  She reached over and slammed the snooze button, lay back down and rubbed her head.  She had to go to school, her chemistry paper was due today and she needed that grade.36

She climbed slowly out of bed, then noticed she was still in her clothes.  She must have been knocked out when David brought her home, she couldnt even remember.  She slowly walked to her closet and pulled out her jeans and black tank top.  She didnt have much time so she quickly put on face powder, eyeliner and mascara, and some clear lip gloss.  She went down the stairs two at a time, grabbed her back pack, and started the four mile walk to school.37

~*~*~*~*~*~38

"Hey Hannah."39

"Hey Amy." 40

"Crazy party last night, have you seen Jerry yet?"41

"No, Im avoiding him as a matter of fact."42

"Thought you might be, I saw David, he was looking for you." 43

"Davids back?!?  I thought he decided to drop out!"44

"Well, something made him come back.  Or someone.  See you later." What did she mean someone?  Nothing happened last night!  She walked through her classes in a daze.  Trying to avoid Jerry, looking for David.45

"Looking for me?" Oh how she loved the sound of his voice.  She spun around to look at him.  Blue jeans, black top, what a coincedence.46

"Hey, nice outfit."47

"I should say the same to you.  But, as usual, you look better in anything." Suck up.  "Have you seen Jerry today?" 48

"What do you think?  Im avoiding him."49

"Probably better that way.  He-" She didnt hear the rest, Jerry walked by with Liz practically glued to him.  She had had enough.  She stormed over to him, pulling off her bracelet as she walked.50

"Take this you jerk." She said as she shoved the bracelet into his hands. "We're over, and Im NOT taking you back this time." She was tempted to hit him, but instead she just walked away.  David caught up to her halfway down the hall.51

"Hey, you ok?"52

"Yep, never been better." She replied sarcastically.  "You know," she said as she stopped and whirled around to look at him, "I dont know why I ever dated that guy in the first place.  Once a cheater, always a cheater!" She whirled back around and stormed down the hall again.53

"Hannah wait up!" David grabbed her wrist.  "Would you consider givng ME a second chance?" Her eyes got huge as she realized what he had just said.  How long had she hoped to hear those words?  How many dreams had she had of this moment.  She threw herself into his arms, her face in his chest.  She loved the smell of him, the feel of his arms tight around her.54

"Is that a yes?" He whispered into her hair.55

"You bet." She whispered back as she tilted her head up to kiss him, a kiss long awaited.56

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I didnt really have a plan for this when I started writing, it came together as it went.  But I like it if I do say so myself!  lol...enjoy and comment please!  I love getting feedback! PS. i dont know what to call it! any ideas?

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