The man was on his way home from work. He couldn't take any more. His boss had given him an official warning as he was late to work and his presentation was not ready in time. One more warning and his career would be over. His best friend had been yelling at him as he was caught screwing his wife. He didn't know what was the big deal. She wasn't that good a fuck. His mother had been bellowing at him for the last 6 months because she thinks that he has wasted his life by marring his heartthrob. She happened to pick today to have a go at him. 1
All he wanted to do was to go home. Walk upstairs to the bedroom and call his wife. She would run upstairs to tend to his need. He told her to spread her legs and to fuck him as hard and as fast as possible. This always relieved his stress and anger. It brought him back down to earth. It made him relaxed until he wanted more from his wife. As soon as he wanted it. She would spread her legs again and he would take full advantage of her. 2
He was on the tube home thinking, imagining what he is about to do to her in an hours time. It's what keeps him living keeps him interested in his wife. He had realised lately that his wife had been aging and all of the chores that she used to do freely were being left undone. She would sit and smoke all day and watch whatever she saw as soon as she switched on the TV. It would only be when her husband calls her to the bedroom when she would get up and do it straight away. Her face was hagged and worn from the life that she had been leading. She used to be the most beautiful woman in the world and now she was the complete opposite. She wanted to get away from him. She wanted to live her life again. See her family and see the world. She has thought many times that if she killed him she would be free. He couldn't hurt her anymore. she could do whatever she wanted. This is what kept her living. Kept her going.3
The husband walks through the front door. All he wants is sex. Nothing more. Nothing less. He drops his suitcase. Takes off his coat and places it on the Bannister's. He starts to walk upstairs while kicking off his shoes and slacking his tie. He walks in the room. Stands by the bed. "Sandra, Sandra come on. You know what time it is. Get your fat arse upstairs." She runs up the stairs and stands opposite him next to the bed. "What?" with the fag hanging out of the corner of her mouth. "Lay on the bed and spread your legs!". She walks over to the bed and slips off her clothes. Standing in her underwear she sexually takes them off. The husband stares at her body in total disgust. he looks her dead in the eye and says "Your ugly, you whore you know why I still fuck you. I fuck you because you know how I like it. None would be able to do it the way that I like it. It took me months to get you right I haven't got the Patience to do it again. You wanna know also why?" The woman is totally shocked and angered by the thought of what he has just said. She don't want to know but she has a feeling that she is about to find out. He looks at her "because your around and you gag for it you slut. Now get on the bed and spread them." 4
She gets on the bed and opens her legs waiting for the awful man to enter her body and sort her out. He jumps on top of her and starts making love. Harder than he ever has done before. Every time he gets harder and harder, faster and faster. She starts to scream. She is in so much pain that it is unbearable to cope. She flips on top taking the pillow with her. She holds it up high nearly touching the roof then slams it over his face. He starts to struggle for his life trying to stay alive. Failing miserably. Floundering under the quilts arms flying everywhere. Then nothingness. He stops moving his arms are like lead weights they are so heavy. She takes away the pillow his last breath being taken. his last words "you're a dirty whore. I'll come back for you. Bam He's dead. She gets off of him and stands by the bed. She is totally shocked but relieved at the same time. She is free she can do whatever she likes. And no matter what he said he would never come back for her.5
Author notes
Hey I know that this is a bit long and rude for that matter but i wanted to right a story and this was the first thig that I thought of. sorry to those that have a profanity filter. This may not make sense.
In your comments i would like you to tell me whose side are you on the womans or the mans and a reason for why? thanx
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hey this is a great write and you are a great writer i loved this but i am on the womans side he never should be that rude to her and yea i loved this you are a awesum writer but yea this is kinda rude and full of profanity but that is jus my type of story i loved this cuz i can sort of relate becuz i was once in that womans shoes and i wanted to kill him but as you prolly already figured out i didn't lol but anyway you should def. write more stories cuz this one is awesum keep it up!!!!!!!! thanx for sharing this with all of us here at allpoetry.......really enjoyed the read
love ya
~~*becca*~~
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you are a great writer and this is a great write!!!!
keep up the great and awesumly awesum work!!!!!!! -
Somewhat negative, but there is an element of sad reality in this story. Which puts me somewhere in the middle, since I believe failed (or for that matter, murderous) relationships (except for maybe Lacy Peterson's) usually take two to tango, and both parties contribute to the decline. In this case, the story describes pretty much only the man's deadend insulting attitude, so it is hard to know who is the worst.
(My hands are out to my sides, like a weighing scales)... uh, he is rude and insenstive and insulting, and she is a murderer... not a nice couple.
Good writing though, just flows through, interesting and the right length. Thanks, Bennett

