Cleansing of the Soul

A waterfall  will cascade over my body and drench the flesh that covers my bones. The cleansing feeling of the water will forever be in my dreams. Creating an Oasis of bliss as I sleep, with the clean head of hair and flesh that I now posess. 1

That night, will float into the day. That watefall will cleanse me from pain, misery for a couple of hours until the morning has given me a new look at life in it's essence. Then I will start over, yet again.2

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This is an away message for me taking a shower...so people can know what I am doing whilst I'm on the computer. I like it a lot.

The whole thing is saying I'm taking a shower, and that's it.

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  • SwaGGtastic
    February 6
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    U tha Truth

    Your Words a Radiculously Good.. i enjoy alot of them actually.. I will be getting around to all of them

  • KaseyL
    January 18, 2006
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    Wow Tim. That is the longest comment anyone has ever written me. I give you bonus points for that. Thank you SOO much for it, really appreciate it.

    Yes, I did write it myself...all by myself. I got annoyed with my first away message (whcih was also mine) so I changed it to this.

    No I didn't know about findquotations..I must see that for myself. Lol...ahh that's exciting!!!! Thanks for telling me *hugs*


  • Sharcu
    January 18, 2006
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    At first I was going to be like: What the heck is this talking about? Then your author's comment explained it. Did you write this? I mean, not that I'm doubting that you wrote it or have this much talent (I have a feeling you are going to yell at me for this comment... just a feeling though)...... just that a lot of people have away messages that they didn't write. Just curious... I'll go ahead and assume you did write this and comment on it like that... ya... Just had to ask though if you did write it.

    Anyways... ya, I really like this. At first when I saw that it was a "story" I almost didn't click on it. But now that I did, I'm glad because it was short (lol). I love the description of this piece... simple amazing... I could never write anything like this. Seriously, I suck with description (you should know if you've ever read any of my work) so ya... it's always nice to read pieces that actually have it... especially one that is so well done as this. So ya! Awesome job!

    By the way, not really apart of your "story", but I don't want to send you a message about this Did you notice all the new features at FQ? Kevin's been working on it and there's a ton of new stuff... like being able to add your own quotes, comment on other people's lists, etc... ya, they aren't all operational, but it's awesome

    --Tim