My sweet revenge

**My sweet revenge**1

Charli pushed the girl into an empty classroom. It was dark outside and everyone had long since gone home. The girl landed roughly and quickly sat in a chair. Charli started pacing the room. She sneered at the girl before her, Gemma, the hate, the anger, the jealousy rushing through her. Jealousy spurned and built inside her.2

'You heartless bitch!!' Charli screamed 'From the beginning you said you never wanted to hurt me, Well guess what!! You did!! For all the times you lied to me, slept with others, turned me against my friends, manipulated me and finally told me you never loved me, another piece of my heart was torn. You did all this and never cared!!'. 3

She paced the room slowly and continued her rant. 'I thought you loved me!! You, you were always MY everything, you were my hope that maybe my life didn't have to be a shitty mess. They all warned me, told me that you didn't deserve me, that I could do better than you, but I didn't listen, I called it a lie when I didn't want to believe!! But I should have noticed, but I was blinded by you!!!'4

**Sparkling angel I believed5

you were my saviour in my time of need.6

Blinded by faith I couldn’t hear7

all the whispers, the warnings so clear.8

I see the angels,9

I’ll lead them to your door.10

There’s no escape now,11

no mercy no more.12

No remorse cause I still remember13

the smile when you tore me apart.**14

Green eyes looked up at Charli defiantly, and the person behind was just about to argue back when Charli raised her arm and silenced her. Charli hadn't finished yet ''Your lies!! your half truths!! your empty promises!!!' Though you couldn't hear it tears were running down her face 'You have truly broken me!! I'm just another soul you've used, another pawn in your game of life!! Are you happy ?!' she screamed, before glaring at her with a cold look.15

**You took my heart,16

deceived me right from the start.17

You showed me dreams,18

I wished they would turn into real.19

You broke the promise and made me realise.20

It was all just a lie.**21

'Your right I don't care!!! Not anymore!!!! I loved you!! Not in the way you wanted but I did! I’ve done nothing to you! Your tearing my heart out and all your caring about is yourself! I know you’re angry at me but this is pointless!” I scream back, the tears now falling from my eyes.22

“oh don’t throw that bull at me!”. Gemma lashed out and stuck Charli's shoulder.“Don’t say that!! Don’t ever say I’m bull shitting you!! I’m not like that anymore!! I only ever did what I thought was best to protect you!” she screamed, anger evident on her face. Charli was knocked back in shock.23

“You don’t know me!” 24

"You have some fucked up logic, how is twisting things saving me?? Why couldn't you have told the TRUTH from the START?? Why did you ever go out with me if you didn't love me?? Was it just to fuck me up, like all your other now souless victims??" Came Charli's painfilled reply.25

**Fallen angel, tell me why?26

What is the reason, the thorn in your eye?**27

She looked a mess, her hair was every where and her make up ran down her face, but despite all this Charli still found her beautiful.  28

 'I should have known, we are so alike, I should have guessed' Charli whispered softly, there was no longer anger in her voice, just sadness.29

**Sparkling angel, I couldn’t see30

your dark intentions, your feelings for me.31

Fallen angel, tell me why?32

What is the reason, the thorn in your eye?33

I see the angels,34

I’ll lead them to your door.35

There’s no escape now36

no mercy no more.37

No remorse cause I still remember38

the smile when you tore me apart.**39

Charli turned around, an evil glint in her eyes, she raised her hand and a jet of solid ice slammed into Gemma. She fell to the floor and whimpered slightly. 40

'Chii...'She tried softly before getting cut off 41

'Don't call me that! You have no right!' Charli screamed.42

'Chii.... it doesn't have to be this way, it could have been different', 43

'Yes Gemma, this has to be done, I have to save myself and others'. Another jet of ice argued her point. 44

**This world may have failed you,45

it doesn’t give you reason why.46

You could have chosen a different path in life.**47

'I was always stronger than you, you were just to blind to see me hiding it! For a while I was scared of you, But. Not. Any. More.' She punctuated her words with blasts of frozen water. 'I can control ice, as you can see, but I can also do more, a lot more.' Spite and malice evident in each word. 'And now you will get what you deserve!'48

**No remorse cause I still remember49

the smile when you tore me apart.**50

The atmosphere in the room was building. Gemma could sense the energy, anticipation what Charli might do, she quickly started doing her strongest protection spell. But she was interrupted as Charli, wish a twist of her hand, had her writhing on the floor and begging for mercy. Screams rang out in the otherwise empty building before Charli broke the spell off.51

Gemma scrambled up and backed again the wall, she had just remembered the dagger she had in her pocket. She withdrew it out of the sheath and held it in front of her. You can't kill me that easily!"She screamed and lunged at Charli.52

**You took my heart,53

deceived me right from the start.54

You showed me dreams,55

I wished they would turn into real.56

You broke the promise and made me realise.57

It was all just a lie.**58

Charli who was caught offguard, didn't move quick enough, the blade swiped past her left eye and she felt blood dripping down her cheek, down the tracks of dried tears. Gemma had made a shallow gash about four inches down her cheek. Charli's hand flew up to her face, and Gemma's face looked surprisingly smug, considering that she was still going to die. 59

Gemma saw the plan unfolding infront of her and.... another jet of ice slammed into her. She was knocked to the floor and the Dagger slipped from her hand. She made a scrambled towards it. Charli intercepted this by kicking the knife away from her.60

**Could have been forever.61

Now we have reached the end.**62

'Any last words?' Charli asked coldly, but not quite angrily. 63

'You're killing me just because I don't love you like you tink I should?'Gemma tried, 64

'No. I'm killing you, because all you can do is hurt people, me, Hayley, Katey, you just use us then abuse us, until we feel like nothing. Well not anymore! There will be no more victims of your hatred!'65

'I'm sorry.... ' Gemma whispered before closing her eyes and resigning herself to her fate. She had tried, but in the end it just didn't seem worth trying to live.66

**This world may have failed you,67

it doesn’t give you reason why.68

You could have chosen a different path in life.**69

'Goodbye' Charli whispered back, 'I loved you'. She summoned her energy and will power to do what she saw as right. She started murmuring the spell but choked on every word. Red gashes soon appeared on Gemma's wrists and neck making it like she had commit suicide. Blood pooled onto the floor and with one last scream Gemma collapsed onto the floor limply.70

Charli sighed after tears upon tears rolled down her cheeks. She had finally done it, she had done what was necessary and now there was no reason left to live. She dipped her finger in Gemma's blood and wrote on the wall 'We didn't die in vein' and then on the other wall 'Now we can be together forever'71

She then laid down beside Gemma and took a knife from her pocket, 'Now we can be together forever' Her mind echoed. She ghosted the ice tipped blade alone the skin of her neck. This was easier than killing Gemma she thought to herself. She dragged the knife deep and blood started spilling from the wound. A few seconds and it was over. Her justice was served.72

**You took my heart,73

deceived me right from the start.74

You showed me dreams,75

I wished they would turn into real.76

You broke the promise and made me realise.77

It was all just a lie.78

Could have been forever.79

Now we have reached the end.**80

Author notes

Ok i started this in my english lesson today. But when i got home i edited it and added the song. it changed alot from the draft.

Update 19/1/05 = Ok this is now in it's third edition.

the song is Angels by Within Temptation.

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  • Shadow inside
    February 7, 2006
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    yay

    yay i may b gettin Within temptation and NIghtwish on CD...... really big yay....

    Also i luv the story, but u already knew that.
    ~Kitty~
    Loves u, see ya 2moz.XX


  • CianLOVES
    January 19, 2006
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    Meh wish i could tho........... gah........... none of whats sed in this is bullshit.... even gemma's replies are from her own mouth....

  • HeartlessAddiction
    January 19, 2006
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    *pout* You stole my quote! I know i told you you could put i'm still peed off just to annoy you XD. It's a very good story, and i would so love it if this came true...apart from the you commiting soodle bit...i REALLY dont like that bit...

  • CianLOVES
    January 18, 2006
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    Chris, that us LONG for me..... i can't write anything long. But if u have any suggestions ill happilty take them.


  • stevens5613
    January 18, 2006
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    interesting

    deffinatly an interesting read i like how u have used verses from within temptations songs and i like the basic story line and the ending i truly amazing tho it is a bit short (if you dnt mind me saying) but good story i rly like it

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