There she sits... do you see her? There, the girl with the black coat and the black hair... Her face is so pale, almost frightening it is.1
Yeah, I see, she's writing in that little book again... She's a very strange person. Don't you think so?2
I do. She's a goth, do you see? I wonder why she came over here, couldn't she stay at her own school?3
Maybe she killed someone!4
Oh, yes, I think that could be it. But I think she is a little to shy and silent for it.5
No, don't let that fool you, all those Goths are freaks, murderers and they worship the devil.6
They do? Yeah... she has always makes strange marks on tables and everything.7
Yeah, I saw those signs... Scary. Don't you wonder if she's depressed or something... weren't all Goths just depressed freaks?8
I think she is... She looks so sad. 9
Like that's surprising. Have you heard the music she listens to? It's awful, and so depressing. And the dresses she wears... I'd die if someone would see me in something like that...10
Oh, there she comes, shhhhh, shhh, don't let her know we're talking about her!11
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Hello there... I heard you two talking. Yeah, even from that far, with the help of Satan of course... hahaha. And don't worry, I'm very happy... And never lonely, the voices are always there.13
Oh, and you know, I'd love to give you one of my dresses...14
Author notes
well... just for fun
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ik denk niet dat iedereen zo denkt. ik irriteer me aan mensen die vooroordelen hebben over me, omdat ze denken dat ze me kennen omdat ik zogenaamd een Goth ben. snap heel goed dat niet iedereeen leuk vindt wat ik draag ed... hoor
dankje
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Leuk verhaal Lian. Denk je dat iedereen zo denkt? Nou ik niet hoor, ik vind mensen die individuen zijn juist interessant. Dat wil niet zeggen dat ik ook heel opvallend door de stad ga lopen in de meest vreemd soortige kleding en zo, maar ik vind het eigenlijk best knap dat anderen durven op te vallen. Want, wees eerlijk, zo val je wel op. En mijns inzien moet je dan ook niet vreemd opkijken dat niet iedereen dat leuk vindt. Iedereen moet maar doen wat hij of zij leuk vindt en zolang ze mij er niet mee lastig vallen of mij iets opdringen, vind ik alles best. Het ga je goed Lian, als gewoon meisje of als Goth. Je bent mij in beide gevallen even dierbaar. Liefs, Anna
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The goth good people and imagetion wow you did some good
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I liked it, it shows how stupid people can be and how much they just don't know..even if they think they do. It was also funny at a part too.
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it is kind of supposed to be funny. and I know there are people who really act like this I'd be the goth in this play
aaah... je hebt gelijk... ik ben dom
lette niet echt op
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It was probably not supposed to be funny but it is, because their are people who honeslty act like that towards people who are different. I always say that it is their own insecurity or ignorance.
Een klein spellingsfoutje hear in de eerste zin moet hair zijn. Komt doordat het t zelfde klinkt, bij mij dan in ieder geval
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That was really interesting. I liked it. I kind of like how it shows how shallow people can be. Good job.
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